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An update! Yay! Had been looking forward to it. So Hisoka's dead for real huh...it's sad. But glad that Sasuke actually loved Hikaru as well.
Keep up the good work. ^^

Gyahh. After reading this a good chunk of the day I feel..... emotionally drained to say the least. I'm glad you're leaving things with Hisoka up in the air, though hell if I know how that could work out. I just wanted to say. The most recent chapter (ch. 13) was amazingly well written. I mean there wasn't THAT much dialogue, but just everything around the time of when they got to the Uchiha compound area... all that stuff was so... good because it felt really right. And I like that Naruto's not really tiptoeing around Sasuke, but he's allowing the Uchiha time to breath and isn't just nagging him. I guess... I empathize w/ Naruto here more... and I wasn't sure in your A/N that I truly believed he was choosing one over the other. I always felt like Sasuke was though I understand Sasuke's feelings about Hikaru... but Naruto was right, they have a son left that needs their attention. I mean look how Fugaku treated Itachi/Sasuke and how they grew up... sheesh... a distant, aloof father can not be great for a kid's head. But anyway... that last chapter was really well written. I was *cough* hoping for the lemon, but you're right, it wouldn't have fit at all. And I like the way it ended w/ them on the bed and Sasuke's head on Naruto's shoulder... in Sasuke's old room no less. I thought that was beautiful... but I am eager to understand the scroll thing and what it has to do w/ Yondy and how it affected Naruto/the twins. Ah well, must find those pics you said were around of the kiddos. I'd love to see them!

~waaaaaaaaaaaa. . . . Walking Barefoot on Broken Glass, Part II is so good it made me cry (and to think i hate crying). . . I hope they find their daughter. . . nice one. . . so please continue this fanfic and don't neglect it. . . ajejeje. . .

You updated! YAY!!! I had thought the Omake was the last chapter, and that they never solved anything about Hisoka, and I was soooo depressed. ;-; But you updated! Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!!! ^.^

Yey an update! ^_^ *hands the writer a cookie* I hope you write more soon and the mystery of the scroll will be revealed soon.

I LOVE it... ^^- I do hope ya continue.. most good story's like.. don go on .. its sad really.. (y) please continue

Iyaaaaaaaaah is right. Holy hell, I love this story already (just finished chap 3. aaah. so excited. i thought i wouldn't like sasuke having sex with naruto's sexy no jutsu. i know it's him and all, but part of me is like... is that cheating? haha. i loved it though, i thought it was really hot. and i loved everything up until then, not just the lemon. I think they're IC really. It seems like you're taking great care to make everyone themselves, and I really like what you've done w/ Sasuke. Everyone's always like Sasuke doesn't have emotions/talk about the. Um, yeah he does, he just doesn't have anyone worth telling them to/feeling them for... except Naruto XD Haha. I can't wait to see what happens next. But I thought I'd say I looooooooove it.

Finally!! :D good chap, really good. Can't wait for more.. I can't wait for things to get back to normal (or as normal as their ever get) and see some sasunaru action. they could try to replace Hisoka with a new child. but they'd understand that nothing can ever replace a child and they'd start to love the new baby for it self...or something..but it's your story.. keep up the good work!! :D

Aaah can't stop reading. At ch. 9. Maybe I'm stupid, but I was totally surprised there! OMG, no, I have to stop if Orochimaru's gonna ruin everything though. I'm too happy to deal with that right now. Will. Read. Later. Aaah *squeal* And I like the name choice. How fun.

Hisoka!!! *tears running like a waterfall*
Oh wow. This story is rather angst. Still, it's great. I'm a sucker for MPregs. Hope you'll update soon.