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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* I'm reviewing!! Anyways, this fic is so great! finally someone using Naruto's wonderful jutsu for what its worth... XD Please continue soon, I'm very very curious as to what will happen next~!
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 5)
Your preloads are awsome!^^ I like.
Nice chapter, very well written, though I would advice you to add a glossary at the end of each chapter for the romanji words in you story, so those who don't already know them can get to know them and understand the slang in the story better.
Waiting for the next update,
Ja ne~
Your preloads are awsome!^^ I like.
Nice chapter, very well written, though I would advice you to add a glossary at the end of each chapter for the romanji words in you story, so those who don't already know them can get to know them and understand the slang in the story better.
Waiting for the next update,
Ja ne~
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snortcacklelaugh* AAHAHHAHAHAHAAA!!! Iruka fainted! *giggles* Oh my god! I've been laughing so hard! I cant wait to see what happens at the bridal shower and bachelor party! I'm also really excited about the next chapter. ^^ I mean, NEJI-SAMA giving advice! About...pregnancy! ^_^ I love Neji-sama to death but..imagining him do that is...hard.
Oh my, I cannot wait until Sasuke deals with a pregnant Naruto. *giggles*
And I expected Sasuke to be surprised! You know, eye bulging, jaw dropping, totally floored surprise. ;-; Even if he DID have a clue about what the problem was!
Oh my, I cannot wait until Sasuke deals with a pregnant Naruto. *giggles*
And I expected Sasuke to be surprised! You know, eye bulging, jaw dropping, totally floored surprise. ;-; Even if he DID have a clue about what the problem was!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally intereseting, you shouldn't leave it at cliffhanger now. When is chapter 6 coming?
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont know how I missed this story before, but I'm glad i found it now
I love the protective Sasuke , (when Jiraya was leering he blocked his view
Neji is one of my fav characters and I liked the way he interacted with Naruto , I always loved the line where he promised he would change the Hyuga Clan
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I know it soon, but I hope the baby is a boy :)
I love the protective Sasuke , (when Jiraya was leering he blocked his view
Neji is one of my fav characters and I liked the way he interacted with Naruto , I always loved the line where he promised he would change the Hyuga Clan
Write More Please
I know it soon, but I hope the baby is a boy :)
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was one of the best fanfics i've read in a long time - good work, and keep it up!
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
twisted sheets ain't possessed by the kyuubi!!! how many devils do you have anyway? ate ----- palink mo kay ------ ung mga fan arts nung fic... hehehe
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story! I love it so much! I heard about it on the SasuNaru yahoo group and I just couldn't stop reading! Hurry up with the next chapter, k?
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I loved your idea that Naruto transformed into his sexy no jutsu form while having sex with Sasuke. Hehehe it must have been an interesting experience for Sasuke. I do hope that Sasuke will react favourably. Afterall he gets to revive his clan now. But then again with his worries of passing on the curse. Hmm......more onegai?
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAH! I totally expected that. I can't wait for Naruto's reaction though. I'm sure it'll be a riot. Keep up the good work!