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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just luv the Omake bit along with the rest. Can't wait for more ^ ^
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what do you mean when you said that in the next chapter you'll explain what happened to Hisoka?
are you saying that there is a possibility that little Hisoka may still be alive?
please..please.....I kinda.."KINDA" hate this chap...it's short...it's sad...and poor Hikaru is being
hated(i think) by his daddy Sasuke....(like what you had said in the previous chappie...being a boy
means a greater possibility of inheriting the sharingan)...
well...GUD LUCK....I hope you guys will post the continuation of this one...VERY SOON!!! ^__^
are you saying that there is a possibility that little Hisoka may still be alive?
please..please.....I kinda.."KINDA" hate this chap...it's short...it's sad...and poor Hikaru is being
hated(i think) by his daddy Sasuke....(like what you had said in the previous chappie...being a boy
means a greater possibility of inheriting the sharingan)...
well...GUD LUCK....I hope you guys will post the continuation of this one...VERY SOON!!! ^__^
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Hisoka is dead just made to look like it by that Snake....:D
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 11)
A nice build-up for the upcoming wrath of Naruto. XD I too love Iruka. :D
I didn't get what you were hinting at last chapter. Maybe the title was in Japanese and I could really understand it. :P
Yay for updating!^^
A nice build-up for the upcoming wrath of Naruto. XD I too love Iruka. :D
I didn't get what you were hinting at last chapter. Maybe the title was in Japanese and I could really understand it. :P
Yay for updating!^^
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, so sad. Poor Naruto, Hikaru, and Sasuke. Sasuke is being distant to his son and lover... Wonderful chapter though. Can't wait for the next one! And thanks for the email, I appriciate it a lot!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO SAD!!!! THAT CREEP OROCHIMARU. I HOPE HE'LL BE SNAKE MEAT ONE OF THESE DAYS.
*SOB* POOR NARU-CHAN & SASUKE
PLEASE...PLEASE.....PLEASE LET THEIR DAUGHTER BE SAFE.
*SOB* POOR NARU-CHAN & SASUKE
PLEASE...PLEASE.....PLEASE LET THEIR DAUGHTER BE SAFE.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I got mentioned, that's so cool:D So I guess that means that the mysterious scroll is going to play a role in Hisoka's amazing return to life. Now I definitely can't wait til the next half of this chapter because we finally get to know what the scroll did/does.
So for criticism: Hmmmm......I can't really think of anything bad that goes to the quality of the story, most of it is just really what I personally want. Like I would really personally love to see this story updated everyday:D, but I know that's not possible. One thing I love about this story is that it's a good idea and it's got good writing to go along with it. I've recently found a lot of stories that are great ideas but the writing's so bad it leaves me unsatisfied but this story always leaves me satisfied. One thing that's very important to a story is the spelling/grammer and yours is always good. If there are any mistakes they aren't noticeable. You ask if the characters are OOC and I think they are. I love to see Nice Sasuke as much as the next person, but that's probably not really in his character. I think he does seem the type who gets stuck in certain beliefs and needs to get the sense kicked into him by someone (like Naruto is about to do). I think their reaction is good, Naruto would probably be the one to get over the initial grief faster and realize that Hikaru still needs them. And I like Iruka too, he's one of my favorite adult characters on the show:D
Well yea, I think that's all really. I'm so happy to be able to read this chapter. I'm in Fl and we got hit by Wilma which knocked out power all over the place, I'm one of the lucky ones who has power back now. YAY!!! Can't wait to see this next half, is it going to be a shorter update time because it's a second half or is it going to take about the same amount of time as a normal chapter? Ok yea I'm gonna stop now. Great chapter, can't wait to see what's going to happen with Hisoka.
So for criticism: Hmmmm......I can't really think of anything bad that goes to the quality of the story, most of it is just really what I personally want. Like I would really personally love to see this story updated everyday:D, but I know that's not possible. One thing I love about this story is that it's a good idea and it's got good writing to go along with it. I've recently found a lot of stories that are great ideas but the writing's so bad it leaves me unsatisfied but this story always leaves me satisfied. One thing that's very important to a story is the spelling/grammer and yours is always good. If there are any mistakes they aren't noticeable. You ask if the characters are OOC and I think they are. I love to see Nice Sasuke as much as the next person, but that's probably not really in his character. I think he does seem the type who gets stuck in certain beliefs and needs to get the sense kicked into him by someone (like Naruto is about to do). I think their reaction is good, Naruto would probably be the one to get over the initial grief faster and realize that Hikaru still needs them. And I like Iruka too, he's one of my favorite adult characters on the show:D
Well yea, I think that's all really. I'm so happy to be able to read this chapter. I'm in Fl and we got hit by Wilma which knocked out power all over the place, I'm one of the lucky ones who has power back now. YAY!!! Can't wait to see this next half, is it going to be a shorter update time because it's a second half or is it going to take about the same amount of time as a normal chapter? Ok yea I'm gonna stop now. Great chapter, can't wait to see what's going to happen with Hisoka.
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kyaaaaa!!!!!>.< ::panic panic:: please dont stop ts-san!!! i love this!!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh please please update this fic soon, it had me entranced, and I have to have more, I cant believe that thier baby girl is gone and until you verify her death with a body I shall not, but I cant stop sniffling, great story, if you still have that email update alert thing I would be ever so grateful to be added to it when you update, soooooooo cant wait, was biting my nails while reading the last two chapters...till next chap, ty for that great read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-) btw why do I get the feeling that Orochi is mistaken??? Im thinking that thier daughter is going to have the Sharakin or how ever it is that you spell it...I just have this feeling that shes much more important than people are giving her credit for...the scroll thingy mighta made her even more powerful me thinks...who knows but cant wait to find out....:-)
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LIVE!!! Nyahahaha!
Futari no mirai- the two's future/destiny/go learn Japanese for yourselves
Don't kill us, yea of little faith.
*goes off to kill the oh so great Michael Jackson incarnate that is Orochimaru*
Futari no mirai- the two's future/destiny/go learn Japanese for yourselves
Don't kill us, yea of little faith.
*goes off to kill the oh so great Michael Jackson incarnate that is Orochimaru*