rate_review Reviews

you're so CRUEL~~!!!!!!!!

why did you let Orochimaru kill Hisoka?! For a SENSITIVE & EMOTIONAL person like me...this chap is very, VERY depressing!! I hate it when I read a story and a baby dies....it's so UNFAIR...babies are so INNOCENT......*cries*

you better have a GOOD explanation for this......>=(

She's dead........!!! Damn Orochimaru! Although Hikaru had become my favorite twin, that was still cruel!! Poor Sasuke and Naruto!! They're probably sooooo sad!! When Hikaru grows up a bit, is Orochimaru going after him? Will Hikaru be falling in love with the son or daughter of someone within the group of friends? For some reason the pairing of Gaara and Hikaru hit me! I don't know why?!?!? Well anyway I just wanted to congraulate for such a great work and stuff! Well anyway....yeah!

Noooooooooooo!! Poor Hisoka, I´m going to cry TOT
You can´t let her die like that...maybe in some way she survived, make her liveeee!
Sorry it´s just that I´m very sensitive when it comes to babies, they are so innocent.
Hope you uptade soon

This story is fucking kick ass awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it! But why did poor Hisoka have to die!!! T_T Seriously I cried at the end of the tenth chapter. It was so heartbreaking. Can't wait for your update!!!!!

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAMAWHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHA!!!!!!!YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!This chapter was just...great!!!I don't know why you find the battle not described enough, I find it very good^^!And yeah Hebi-chan*personnal way of naming Orochimaru* is soooo evil>_< gwah I just can't believe it :he even throw babies in rivers(which evil character could be evil enough for doing such a thing???lol)!!! And you put the Tsukiyomi in this fics wouhou thank you thank you thank you soooo much!!!*Hey what's happening...is that I found this chapter so great that I could easily forgive the author for making us wait...???*
And the next chapter...waaaaaaah the next one seems to be very difficult and sad to write,ne? Good luck then I'm quite looking forward to reading it!!!^0^
So see you next time! ^_~

OMG!!! *sobs*

No, no, Hisoka, no!

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There baby girl is gone...what the F! That was so cruel poor Sasuke and Naruto the pain they both must be feeling. Poor Naruto he'd know for sure a sixth sense if his daughter he gave birth to was dead or alive wouldn't he? and I hope she is a live notherwize is would be to sad.toto sad.

HOMG!! That was so cute... i hope you update soon!! i cant wait to read more!! :D

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It's kind of sad the way you have the twins acting towards their parents and Sasuke is such a bastard to his son. Parent favortism sucks dude. Hopefully you will express more feelings from the parents towards their children and the children towards their parents.I realize Sasuke's just acting cold towards his son due to the Sharingan, but can't the daughter develop sharingan too, or is that explained somewhere in the manga, I might have missed.? I think you are doing a good job at developing your story, it's a little rough with the slow pace and then the quick pace but it's still very fun to read.

Oh yeah make Orochomaru and Kabuto suffer, like have the kids be total terrors to them. I mean afterall what are they going to do to the kids? They are both pressous because of the power both hold over their parents and are probably as powerful as their parents, or will be as powerfull one day.

Other than that I have enjoyed reading your story a great deal and hope to see another chapter soon. No matter what you write in this story I will be happy to read it.
love, jazzy