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No evil evil!!! NOOOO BRING HIKARU AND HISOKA BACK!!!!!!!!!!

Hi!!! Weee....you dedicated a chapter for me?!?!??! I'm soooo flattered!!! *glomps* And yeah, I'm a Filipino!! Wooo, go us! Hehe XD

Gaaa...bad bad Orochimaru!!!! =( Tsktsk..oh well, we'll just have to wait and see how the daddys will save the day. Anyhoo...I love the Kage Bunshin nannies. I thought that was awesome!! So original!!! I never would have thought of that! Hahahaha... K, waiting for more! I won't tell you to update ASAP coz well....we all know how bad I've been in that department XP Just take your time. I loooove your fic. =)

How could you leave it there! I'm going to cry! I want to read more!

NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS CANT BE!!!!!
why'd you stop there? pls pls pls post the next chapter soon pls i cant bear to wait a month to know what happened after that!!!!! ahhhhhhhh!!!!
im gonna go insane!!!!

hey ya!!! an update!!!

This is kinda sad ya know...you made Sasuke and Naruto have
their "favorite"...Is it the right term?? hehehe..I hope you get my point..

A cliffhanger....meanie..!!! ^__^

I'll wait for the next chappie, aight?

lol haha. wanna know what i found ironic? even sasuke's own daughter is his fan...damn all the girls lol -_-; lol no i don't mean it in the "bad" sense. Just that, lol, it's kind of funny ^^ Wah! I loved this chapter. Kudos. I reallyyyyyyy enjoyed the scene where they were both woken up with the babies cries. That's just really so beautiful lol. I can totally see parental love in that part (even though they're so tired!! lol). There were some spelling mistakes this time :( lol but they weren't that much of a hindrance, really. It's too bad that it takes so long to update this fic - and I know that you need the time to organize everything between all of you and to actually find time to write this fic and the other one (Bygone and Bylines - also a fic that I really like!) but but but lol, I love the fic ^^ I want to see more of what happens. I want to see some more "desperation" in love between them...like they love each other soooo much and they clutch on to one another despite everything *cries* <3 hehe. That's why, I can't wait for the next chapter! Please keep writing such wonderful fics. Great story, all of you.

oh yeah! one more thing. I can't believe Sasuke doesn't love them both equally :\ didn't he promise Neji that he would be a good father to his kid (heh, kids now! doesn't mean you can take back your promise, Sasuke-bastard! damn you)!?!??!?! lol. So I was a bit disappointed in him. Cause cause cause Hikaru is such a cutie. Btw!!! I have your art as my wallpaper. It's so cutesy. You mentioned in the fic that Hisoka has black eyes, your picture has bluish eyes which is cute! I can't imagine a blond with black eyes tho :\ lol but I guess there must be a reason behind it all. Peace.

argh, you chose the obvious plotline.

OMFG!!!! :gonk: Give teh kids back!!! Give 'em back!!! ::Stabs Kabuto with a spork over and over again then starts poking his left eye with a stick:: GIVE EM BACK BAKA!!!!

Wonderful chapter! I so love this story to pieces! Lots of stuff in this one, and what a cliff hanger! I hope that they get the kids back ASAP, or I'm sure it won't be good...I also hope that eventually Sasuke will warm up to his son, although I'm guessing he is not letting himself get close since he was thinking that Akatsuki really wants his son, and not so much his daughter. Anyways, great job, and keep up the fantastic writing! Can't wait for the next installment!