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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's not horrible... it's interesting, and a bit hot. Don't get so down on yourself!
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!!I am such a team 8 lover and your lemon was perfect
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this....It was realy good. Not bad
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH IT DOESN'T SUCK DON'T SAY THAT! It was really good! I liked it alot!
It's kind of hard to find KibaxHina fics, and you wrote it very well too!
{the more fics you write the more good comments you can recieve and you'll see how good you really are.}
That's only counting the people that comment.
-Minty
It's kind of hard to find KibaxHina fics, and you wrote it very well too!
{the more fics you write the more good comments you can recieve and you'll see how good you really are.}
That's only counting the people that comment.
-Minty
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey your story- it didn't suck. I might be kinda young but...I know good righting when I see it. much love to you and your story.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOO i liked this a lot! i really like the kibahina coupling and dont find too many fics on them!
thanks for making one. Look forward to your new ones
thanks for making one. Look forward to your new ones
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh my god do NOT say your wrok sucks! It was awsome! Soo passonite and oh my god! I absolutly loved it my only complant was that it was too short. there needed to be more let down at the end. you should wright a sequal it was awsome!
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. If you didn't already guess, I'm a huge Kiba/Hinata fan. They are such a cute couple and I can so see them being together rather then Hinata/Naruto. Well I can't wait to read more of your stories.
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You actually do not have much of a technical problem. You do have some grammar errors but they do not detract very much from the story. You are not in dire need of a beta. If you feel you do require one feel free to ask.
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... Thnk you Janet ^_^ I like a little SasuNaru Sometimes too but never really thought of writing one myself. But maybe I will soon just to experiment ;-)
And thnk u FlameArchanist(Im sowwy if i spelt this wrong!) I appreciate the feedback. ^_^ And is that an offer? Then maybe I will send you a story sometime and you can beta read it for me next time.
LaterZ~
And thnk u FlameArchanist(Im sowwy if i spelt this wrong!) I appreciate the feedback. ^_^ And is that an offer? Then maybe I will send you a story sometime and you can beta read it for me next time.
LaterZ~