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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yea, she does. now is that kid slow or what?
cool oneshot tho:D
cool oneshot tho:D
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAA the last line was hilarious. Funny and cute.
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November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow naruto.. you only get it when she gives you a bj? heh, he is pretty dense.....
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October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting but somewhat generic
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The ending reminded me why I luff naruto-kun xD YOU GO HINATA!! WHHOO!!!
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should continue this...and SOON!!! NaruHina forever!!!!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is just really cute. ^_^ Enjoyed this excerpt. Cute, naughty and very into the characters -- albeit drunk. Haha! Great job!
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my word.
when is the second chapter coming out..?
when is the second chapter coming out..?
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey that was funny can u email me when u update,if u can my emailo is jmaxx112714@aol.com the fic is awesome
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, more, this needs more. This can't be all to the story, its just getting good, though funny to add with the titles name, this just leaves you wanting more. So, please, more, another chapter, possibly the day after, which leads to more in the end, even if it isn't very descriptive, just please... more.