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person Jackel
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that this most definitely deserve more chapters, so please, if you can, continue this fic. Its took good to stop here, not to mention you left all us readers with such a cliffhanger, please continue this sometime in the near future.
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesing. Can't decided if I like this one or not.

Oi! Since you go to cons in Chicago, does that mean you are going to ACEN 2006? I am! Though I am cosplaying One Piece Characters and Chobits characters this year.
person ladyp
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha.. that was a really enjoyable read! cute and funny.. great mix ^-^
person Leech
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review sooner. I had trouble standing up again after falling out of my chair after those last lines.

Hehe ... had to laugh at the fact too, the interaction between them is kind of cute and the way you didn't design this as too graphic probably fits the whole picture better. Good job, makes for a good drabble!

I'll hunt that original fic of yours down ^^

DL
person Katzztar
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD Oh that's priceless .. One second Naruto's saying 'don't touch me there' then he quicklyy yells 'touch me there'! Ah the naive exploration of youth... it's so funny!
person Dark Phoenix
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*slaps knee* That rawked! XD
person alicia
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Naruto's a complete dork...this story was so funny!
person K-C
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved your fic Genin Dance on fanfiction dot net!
*sexy hint* Give us more details!
A second chapter too!!! *cheers in the backround*
person kitsune
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!!!
more more more!! barely any naru/hina it sux that theres so little thats why u need to update!!
plz?
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls out of chair and twitches*

It probably would take something that direct to get his attention. *snickers*

*climbs back into chair*

cute, funny and I liked seeing a naughty Hinata! ^_^;