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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, why did you take the flowers Kakashi?! Oh, how sad is that? Poor Naruto-I hope this has a happier end then it does opening. I can't to see how Naruto runs to Itachi-for help or to be killed or to just get away?! You are leaving me wanting to know more so I hope you find the inspiration to update soon!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!*gasp* Naruto escaped!!*bigger gasp* GO NARU-CHAN GO AND FLEE AWAY FROM THOSE BASTARDS WHO HURT YOU SO MUCH!!!YEAH!!>.< man oh man, I hope naruto gets to meet itachi in the next chapter and when I say meet I mean like talk or be in each others presence and not having the chapter ended just when the meet>.< I hope you arent that cruel....are you?? O_o okay...calm down...*sigh* please update!!Im so loving this fic!!!!!!!^^
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bit off more than you could chew? (I am trying to see if reverse phychology will work,cum on, kill the bastard Sasuke,Hello...sigh,I will check back later...hey !!! sighs..wanders a w a y)
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your fanfic is way too cool.... i love it! i cant wait for the next chapter!!!! please hurry....
btw, i love the dark naruto... the way he laugh and the way he acts... i am really curious on what on earth that makes him so fuckin' dark... continue the good work ok! ganbare!!!!!
btw, i love the dark naruto... the way he laugh and the way he acts... i am really curious on what on earth that makes him so fuckin' dark... continue the good work ok! ganbare!!!!!
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoooooooooooohoooooooooooooooooooooo this is goooooooood. please update.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha...nooooo dont'get lazy, if you don't write then I can't have anything to procrastinate my work with! Please Update, the plot is good! Type!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really have to ask...is English your first language? Because the language of the fiction is horribly garbled. Word tense is awful. It makes it hard to follow and I had to make leaps of ligic to figure out exactly what you were trying to say. I suggest a beta reader, because the summary sounds promising, but the text fails to follow through. With a beta reader, you can work on fixing the language and focus on the story development more...because that's a little knotty too O_o Sorry, but it is!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gawd! i loved this chapter! that was even more unexpected than the unexpected thing i thought would happen! please update super fast! i love your fic!
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh....I can't wait to find out what happens!!! ^___^ Oh, and here: *hands you a box of chocolates* ...this is for updating!!! Now...go write more!!!
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awe, man, don't be laze and update coz this storys really good ^_~