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for Bitter Like Me

by TenshiKaitou

person darkangel
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whine* wait!!!! you can't just leave me hanging here. i wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lara
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey!! an angsty fic!!! i dont know if its just me, but i get sick of all the sappy stories after awhile!! there's nothing quite like good old angst!! i applaud you for writing this story!!!!i cant wait for the next chapter!!
person Teaspoon
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol I read a couple of tragic endings and i have to say i'm biased against them. I feel soo drained and with nothing to hold on to. put all the tragedy you wantin the plot but not on the ending! Otherwise warn me ahead of time! So far the two chapters you have here are very interesting and I can't wait to see whats the proof naruto has for sasuke !!!!
person tsu
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!Please continue!!!!!
person kat8cha
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What? WHAT?!?! What are they looking at!?!?!?! EVIL!!!!! ~pounces and glares~ You better post more soon! Or I will soo .... do something!
person Rhenoah
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! ANGST?!?!?!?! I'm really more the happy go lucky fic type person but I'll take my share of angst. It looks great so far, and it would be wicked if you did do a alternate ending you know for us saps.

person clowangel
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're going to turn this into a tragedy all the way? Darn.. I really really dont like angst. It's soo.. well, boring. -_-; Cant you make it more Naruto-like? Where there's comedy? stupidity? and useless crap? and just a tad bit of angst?
person Liliath
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really cool story. the drama and suspense its killing me and I cant wait fot the NaruIta part^^ please update soon!!^^
person kenshinjunkie03
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why did you make naruto and sasuke personalities switch? this is a good story but it's sad to see sasuke like that.
person Yami Jay
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naruto is that bitter? Ouch!