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Omg, I really really like this story so far!!! OMg, I can't wait till the next chapter so update soon, okay?!

omgosh~
I LOVE IT!
when i read this~ i can really understand the characters emotions and needs [so kinky lol jp]
love narutos character alot
can't wait to continue reading!

amazing...
lately when i watch naruto... fillers... he is not growing up or learning at all.
even in the manga~ it's dissapointing to even read/watch it.
But reading this~ i'm so impressed and i love how much emotion you put into the characters.
i love how the characters grew and acting on their needs/desires.
very promising and expect me to read until the end!
hugsxkisses

That was incredible. I was so excited when I saw this story at the top. I had to look twice to realize I was really seeing it, and then I looked a third time just to make sure it was really an update. I really love how this is coming along. I was so worried after you'd lost your notebook that we wouldnt see anymore. So glad that you are continuing on. I love how this chapter played out and I really liked the interaction between Neji and Naruto. I cant wait for more.

noooooooooooooooooooooooo tell me more tell me moremoremoremoremoremore!
sasuke... tsugi.... naruto....
good plot and very original might i add.
will sasuke choose naruto or tsugi?
what will naruto do?!

arrrgghh!!! the thought of sasuke having something with another person beside naruto makes me... arrgghh!! i hope you will make it better in the next chapter, though i think judging by the flow of the story it will be otherwise. guh.

and its not fair for naruto, really, really not fair. he had risked his life for a year, yearning, missing, at danger and so far from home while sasuke is ...

just because he's freaking lonely? what the fuck? that's so... weak. he shouldnt be like that. and the least he could do is to be faithful to naruto.

sorry for the rant. the thought of sasuke being unfaithful irritates me. and i hope the story will come to make it better somehow.

..Not to be mean or anything, but I don' think the Wave Country has a hidden ninja village. In fact, I'm fairly sure it doesn't. Otherwise, wouldn't they have hired Wave country ninjas for the job instead of the Konoha ninjas? I believe it's merely a island country with no hidden village. Oh and I hate to be silly, but there is a Water Country which habors the Hidden Village of the Mist.

^-^ Anyyyways..I love the story. I find the Naru/Sasu interaction depressing, but I'm assuming that each's detachment will be further explained. All in all, a wonderful story. I love the art you did of the first scene too. Simply gorgeous and vibrantly colored. Well, I'll keep an eye out for updates! I hope you find you notebook. (I know how that is. I lost one of my character's entired background story when my computer killed itself. And it was long and detailed.)

ahh...the tension, the drama, the characters...everything is splendiferous and layers together wonderfully. well, i think so anyway. >_< can't wait for the next part and everything else.

wishes and luck in getting your book back.

Reading these last few chapters I had a "OH. OH, I get it now!" The italicised text REALLY helps.

So...Sasuke actually screwing an OC, eh? Interesting. It's rare you see him get in a casual relationship because someone else puts it on him, that's pretty bold of you. I'm enjoying your writing, and appreciating the fact you're being original. A lot. -.-;;

Keep it up and it'll be a classic! *review <3*

Wow that was a great chapter!) So much happening. Can't wait to find out what happened to them. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Oh and good luck in finding your notebook. Hopefully it will show up in the near future.