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for You Can Never Go Home Again

by CrystalChild

person kyuubigirl
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dammit Sasuke, you slut! How could you give it up before Naruto could have a chance? I almost wish Naruto would have stopped when he wanted to. Sasuke just have better been trying to replace Naruto with some dumb blonde not worth his time. *ANGER* Now I hope Naruto goes and screws someone else and rubs it in Sasuke's face. Find Itachi, Naruto! That'll hurt the most!
person Neko-Chan
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic ^_^ Hope ya find your notebook soon cuz i cant wait for more!!!
person masako
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
id say rap up the section and then see if you can locate the notebook...but if it gets to be toooo long then you might have to wing it.....i'm hoping you get the notebook though. GOOD LUCK
person KouTora
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's sad to hear that you lost the notebook. I know the pain - It happened to me once.
Just to let you know, I'd die a happy girl if you continued. I've been following this story since you first posted it, and it's been in my bookmarks this whole time. I love it sooooo much! I'm just dieing to know what happened in the past and what will happen in the future! So, I'm with you 100% if you decide to continue. Because it would definately be worth it.
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work! This is a great fic and I can't wait to read more! update soon!!
person Moon_Shadow
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Completly loved it! Keep up a good work!! Update soon!
person masako2685
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is interesting, and i'm hooked right now...keep it up :-)
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. Maybe because it's not as angsty and it doesn't make my heart hurt as much as 4 did. But probably more so the reason was that Naruto was the one to leave and asked the far more important question that is on all our minds. I was _so_ angry at Sasuke that he'd have the nerve to ask such a question when it was Naruto who should've been asking. So, yes, I like how you made Naruto stronger in that respect but it's still sad. Hope you don't take as long with the next chapter as you did with this one--I was half afraid that you had dropped it! ^_^;; (:whew) Really glad you didn't.

And although I may not feel that pain anymore, now I'm just angry 'cuz it sounds like Tsugi was just using Sasuke (or seeing the "last Uchiha" as a conquest) and didn't actually have any true feelings towards him. That pisses me off more than anything. Especially considering how Sasuke's acting now, making Naruto pick up the pieces afterwards. Grrrr...I think I hate Water Country and ALL their inhabitants now.

But I'm glad we got to see a little more of what happened after that owl. And it really makes me wonder what forced him away for a year because there's obviously more.

Great job so far! Keep it comin'! :)

(Chapter 5)
person kipper
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intense. i realy like your story so far. i really hope that Sasuke's old lover did not die or something, cuz he seemed like he was in love with Naruto before he left on the mission. if he were to fall for someone else so soon afterwards - he would seem too fickle. sorry, i just like to speculate. but i really have enjoyed your story so so much or else i wouldnt be thinking about it so much. hope to read more!
person firskey
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can confindently say that you make me hate Sasuke in ways that I've never hated him before...

I think I missed an update somewhere, but the last two chapters were really great. The way you write flashbacks is pure genius. Usually I hate them, but in your story they flow so smoothly. I most definitely will be on the lookout for the next chapter!