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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't put yourself *or* this chapter down. It was a great chapter. And I loved that ending you gave it. Keep up the great work, and am looking forward to the next update. Ja!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O nooooooooooo!!! how cruel...i never thought I'd say this but...."Bad Sasuke-kun!" oh poor naruto...he must feel so hurt right now...awww no i'm really sad...please say things work out... i hope...no i pray they do..Naruto loves Sasuke-teme...awww the pain...my poor kit!
update soon pretty please!
update soon pretty please!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow - i'm so into it! love the progression of the story - the flashbacks, the suspense, the mystery, the believable angst. i really liked how you built up the suspense with the clicking owl and kyuubi-naruto dialogue. i really thought that eberybody was going to die - ahahaa. I can't wait to find out more about the relationship between Sasuke and Tsugi. When i was reading that, the feeling of "NoOOooooooooooooOOO - don't forget about Naruto, Sasuke!!!" was going through my head. :D
i'll definitely be checking for more from you! this story is awesome and i can't wait to read more!!! GO CRYSTAL CHILD!!!
i'll definitely be checking for more from you! this story is awesome and i can't wait to read more!!! GO CRYSTAL CHILD!!!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dark... makes my soul hurt kind of dark. I do hope there's a happy ending in store for us, but I understand if there isn't. You've set a nice forboding ambiance. Keep it up. Update when you have time.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omgsh.. it was neji wasn't it!? the one that took sasuke! omgsh... sasuke's a whore! TT.TT omgsh.. i love this fic. i'm like, stunned.. it's going in all the beautiful ways possible. it's brilliant. i loved the smut.. it's what i live for ^^
update soon! it'd be bad to leave me hanging like this.. i might go insane ^^;;
update soon! it'd be bad to leave me hanging like this.. i might go insane ^^;;
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Though I'm used to and like SasuNaru more, this is intense! I don't think I've read a purely NaruSasu that I liked more than this. ^_^
First, I love how you write the present while inserting pieces of the past, it really gets your nerves on edge while you're waiting for the next tidbit on what happened, and I love the suspense you're creating! (What happened to Naruto and the gang on that mission?!?! I wanna know! And, although I know my heart is going to ache at knowing, I also want to know the nature of his relationship with Tsugi--that bastard (:mumble).) And I don't like your title! Well, I like it because it fits, but I don't like it because it makes it pretty obvious that there's no turning back for their relationship and ,more importantly, that what's done is done. :(
But what's really getting to me: Sasuke-teme!!!!! He cheated on Naruto! T_T I can't believe that bastard would let _anyone_ other than Naruto touch him like that. Especially before Naruto could! And to even have the GALL to consider that this "Tsugi" could REPLACE Naruto!?!?! Oh, I SOOO hope you've either killed that bastard of a character or will let Naruto kill him mercilessly later on. Because I don't think I could stand reading about him!!! >( Or, on second thought, let Naruto rid himself of Sasuke and make Sasuke the one to come crawling back. Yeah, he deserves heartache after what he put Naruto through. Though I'd feel better if I could beat him up personally for what he did.
And you! Trying to make me us feel bad for Sasuke that _Naruto_ broke his promise!? (:shakes fist) I'd rather feel sorry for Naruto that Sasuke would betray him like that. You'd better fix this!!!! So update soon or you're getting a bigger barrage of email from me later! ;D
(Chapter 4 end)
First, I love how you write the present while inserting pieces of the past, it really gets your nerves on edge while you're waiting for the next tidbit on what happened, and I love the suspense you're creating! (What happened to Naruto and the gang on that mission?!?! I wanna know! And, although I know my heart is going to ache at knowing, I also want to know the nature of his relationship with Tsugi--that bastard (:mumble).) And I don't like your title! Well, I like it because it fits, but I don't like it because it makes it pretty obvious that there's no turning back for their relationship and ,more importantly, that what's done is done. :(
But what's really getting to me: Sasuke-teme!!!!! He cheated on Naruto! T_T I can't believe that bastard would let _anyone_ other than Naruto touch him like that. Especially before Naruto could! And to even have the GALL to consider that this "Tsugi" could REPLACE Naruto!?!?! Oh, I SOOO hope you've either killed that bastard of a character or will let Naruto kill him mercilessly later on. Because I don't think I could stand reading about him!!! >( Or, on second thought, let Naruto rid himself of Sasuke and make Sasuke the one to come crawling back. Yeah, he deserves heartache after what he put Naruto through. Though I'd feel better if I could beat him up personally for what he did.
And you! Trying to make me us feel bad for Sasuke that _Naruto_ broke his promise!? (:shakes fist) I'd rather feel sorry for Naruto that Sasuke would betray him like that. You'd better fix this!!!! So update soon or you're getting a bigger barrage of email from me later! ;D
(Chapter 4 end)
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yeaaaaah~ ...
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IH YEASSSS!!! I really like the idea of Naruto resisting the beauty of ice-queen Uchiha.... XD XD XD and sashuke goes GAGA to him...... XD XD
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAWHHH!!!!! EVIIIIL! that's goooood! make sashuke suffffer~ oh pls.... UPDATE!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more as soon as possible! I thought this was really fantastic! I just read the first four chapters and I am floored. Really, really wonderful writing, great story. You're breaking my heart, and I love it! Great Job!