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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How dare you not to continue ?I want to see the next .Update ,please~~~~~~~~~~
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! ... That was awesome. I just came across your fic here and I am loving the story. You are doing an oustanding job, barely any grammatical errors. Love it. Keep up the great writing, and am looking forward to the next installment. Ja!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! What a great fic -- very neat idea, and quite artfully done.....I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Ja ne!!!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I mean just wow. I waited so long for this chapter, and you made it worth it. Now get to work on the rest. I absolutely love this story. Did something happen to Sasuke by that big blonde guy in the picture? Sasuke is acting like something bad happened to him, that he was hurt in a bad way. Naruto on the other hand we know something bad happened to him. He just isn't accepting it. He is denying something. Anyways awesome story, keep up the awesome work. coolsa.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah! i can't help but want more - lovely! i'm really enjoying this.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP that was AMAZING!!!!!! what was the deal with te owl? PLEASE continue!!!!!!!!! I got to know what happens next!!!! Say that someone esle wants Naruto!!!! and and and . . . umm . . . not just for his power of the demon but for his body toooooo!!!!!! Damn he is sexy don't ya think?
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This looks interesting. I look forward to finding out what's happened. ^_^
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very well written, and the mystery is very intriguing. your prose manages to convey the atmosphere perfectly. readers are kept guessing about the mysterious owlman (as i dubbed him) and the guy in the pic.
blond huh? maybe someone sasuke has to remind himself of naruto... whoo, can't wait for the lemon scene.
better give 'em hot smexing to make things better... *lol*
blond huh? maybe someone sasuke has to remind himself of naruto... whoo, can't wait for the lemon scene.
better give 'em hot smexing to make things better... *lol*
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your characters are well wrought.Keep going.
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i still don't understand the meaning of this story title. but still, this is a great story, so i won't complain much. update soon.