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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me likey!!! please continue
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It liked how you jumped back and forth although at times I must admit it took me a while to realize I was reading a flashback. I'm curious now as to why it took him a year and not a week and how his team did. Oh and Sasuke's and everyone else's reaction.
Keep up the good work and update soon!!! :D
Keep up the good work and update soon!!! :D
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this...the writing just flows and Naruto is soo...cool. Like he's suddenly turned into James Bond or something. Smooth all around. I also am interested in the flashbacks. Good use of tense and events in time. I would love to read more! ^^
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!
this was a good first chap
i really like it so far
hope you update soon
this was a good first chap
i really like it so far
hope you update soon
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really interested in the story! The plot is interesting and I'm dying to know what happened to make the mission last so long. <33
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, i thought the 1st chapter was pretty interesting. looking forward to the next update. ^_^
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm not confused in the least, and, as a matter of fact, i'm very interested in what you have to say next. this is a very promising start! can't wait to see where you take it.
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i purposely logged in to review your story, so that means it is fabulous. please update soon. don't keep us (readers) waiting too long ne...
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* that's is so sweet and yet a bit sad for some reason...Wait...it's not a tragic romance right? Anyway I really like the chapter and hope to see more of the story =)
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's confusing... But I like it ^_^