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Why doesn't Naruto ask Sasuke to contact the fox through his sharingan? ~Love the story!

oh my god. O_O Unexpected!!





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I've only just discovered this story for the first time yesterday and managed to marathon about thirteen chapters in a single night, only just finishing it tonight after I came home from work. (Ok, so I might be slightly sleep deprived right now. Sue me.)
I just wanted you to know that this story was fantastic. I really enjoyed it. Although I am a little confused as to what happened to Gaara. :/ Perhaps I'll have to go back and re-read it cause I must have missed something. The story also seemed to come to an abrupt end, which is fine, but I still didn't feel the closure with Naruto and Gaara's relationship (as evident in the fact that I don't know what happened. Did Naruto have to kill Gaara?)

In any event.. this story is awesome. Very well done. Expertly written. A fantastic handle of the characters. Over all, five star material. Just so you know, I'm adding this to my recommened reading list. Keep up the excellent work. I'll be reading. ^^

Huh? I'm afraid I can't understand this story at all... it's like I'm missing the entire first half of the story, it doesn't make any sense.

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Although this story was obviously published quite a few years ago, I felt that it was only fair to review a story that I had read with rapt attention the past few days. It is regrettable that you don't have more reviews, since you do deserve them. You crafted the story brilliantly and used words in such a poetic sense that although the story seemed fleeting, the emotions ran deep under the current the entirety of the story. You should be very proud of such a work. The work, in short, was beautifully haunting. Thank you for completing it, in addition to the epilogue as well.

And now that it's over, I can't find the words to thank you enough for writing this masterpiece. *hugs you and gives you chocolates* I can't tell you how wonderful it is to find an excellently written fic that remains that way until the end. From your plot line to your amazing characterization and details to the consistancy with which you wrote this, all simply breathes of emotion and talent. It's always nice to find a fic where the "sex" actually means something; where the characters are alive and different, yet still true to thier "real selves". You had an amazing idea, and you pulled it off with grace -- congratulations, your fic has officially won a spot a spot in my heart as one of the few that truely moved me. I will never forget it.

And yes, that was hopelessly sappy, but can you blame me after an ending like that? ^___~

Thanks again for a wonderful experience, and please continue to write so that others can enjoy your talented work as much as I have. Keep up the good work!!!

~An Admiring Fan ^^

i'm really...sad. i feel so bad for gaara!!! i really liked this last chapter. i think it led very well up to naruto and sasuke being together. i think there was a sense of inevitability throughout the whole chapter that you conveyed really well. still, i feel so unfulfilled because of gaara. maybe i have a soft spot for him, but i just feel like he was completely ditched. especially since you made it so painfully obvious that he loves naruto. poor gaara...what is he gonna do now that he has no one to share his demony-ness with? sorry, i really do like you story a lot. it was really moving, and i feel that not many fics have that effect. you actually stirred emotions in me, which is always a good sign. i guess im just more of a naruto and gaara fan? great job. please let me know if you write something else.

This story was wonderful! Thanks so much for sharing it!!

simply beautiful. thank you for sharing this story.

No, thank YOU for writing it!
And sorry for not reviewing earlier. But better late than never, right? :)
I love the plot, its twists and wisdom in your fic.
Thanks again, reading it has given me great pleasure.