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I don't give well rounded reviews. I just simply beg for an update, toddle off, and wait not-so-patiently.
It's good... really good, and the pretty angst factor [or at least in my opinion] rocks. Love the whole Naruto-demon and Gaara-demon thing going one, bleh, I'm not very good at reviewing, as I might have warned.

Poor Sasuke, I feel bad for that darling. Then again, I'm a proud biased lover of him -- oh well.
I have no idea if you're still alive or not. Alive meaning that you still update, circulate, and exist.

One day, please and thank you.

Wow, this is an amazing story! I just sat down and read through chapter 12, and I am floored. I cannot wait to see what will happen next! Such an original story, and your writing is absolutely amazing! Can't wait for more!

I really do look forward to your updates, but I though this was sasunaru? When will it happen? I like nargaa, but I like sasunar more, plus I thought that nargaa was just like a comfort thing! Oh, well, how much longer will this be? Good story.

This is a really, REALLY good story. I love the diction, flow, narrative voice, etc. The only thing you need to watch for is the tense changes. You switch from past tense to present tense a bit and it’s a little distracting (specifically during the ‘sex scenes’ and when they’re talking about the demon children… but describing it in the present tense *does* give it certain amount of intensity that might be lacking otherwise so I guess it’s not a *bad* thing, per se… it’s just slightly *distracting*) . I wish the sex ‘scenes’ were a little more *graphic* (hey, this is AFF after all) but I’m a pervert and sadly not everyone is as depraved as I am (it’s a real shame too). But your kissing/foreplay scenes are so intense and well written that it TOTALLY makes up for it. My God, they’re fantastic. Who knew a kiss could be so HOT?! LoL.

Naruto is such a stud.

Anyway, I also wanted to compliment you on the plot. It’s totally original and, as someone who has no life and has therefore read an ungodly amount of Naruto fan fiction, I’m incredibly impressed. The whole Demon children/evacuation thing was GENUIS. And I love how you’ve portrayed Naruto’s relationship with Gaara and Sasuke and I also love how you’ve illustrated the tension between them all too. Plus the way Kohona’s reacting to all of them is pretty realistic. I’m glad you brought the probability that the town might try to impression Naruto to the forefront. A lot of writers either just ignore the political/practical implications of the Kyuubi or they simply don’t think of it. Maybe it takes a certain amount of maturity or something? I dunno…

Oh, and I love the title. I didn’t get it at all until they started talking about how it’s only the little things that don’t change. It sorta made me think about how sometimes the little things are the most important. They add up and you never see it coming. So that made me love this story even MORE.

All in all this is FANTASTIC. Honestly I should’ve been in bed like 3 hours ago but when I started reading this fic I kept on thinking ‘I’ll go to bed after this chapter’. I’m such a liar. Geeze. Anyway sorry this review’s so damn long. I figured I’d just leave a GINRORMOUS review instead of 12 measly little ones. I didn’t think I’d have this much to say though. Sorry *blushes*. It’s just … your story’s so damn GOOD. Anyway, please update soon. I promise not to leave such long, rambling reviews again, okay? Deal.

Thanks for posting!!!!

~Jiro (aka: Nudd)

Nothing best but to read two chappies at one go! Such a satisfying night this is! Well-written as always, so do continue updating! I don't have to say more, do I? Heh.

Wow. So confusing. For awhile there I thought they all lost it. Killing kids and so forth. So I guess major damn broke and minor and major demons are possessing people? Or is this another plot of Akastuki's? Love the story, a bit demented as it is. Keep up the great work. coolsa.

it is interesting...I have a bad feeling about their future happiness however....I hope I am wrong..

Argghh!!! Need...More...
It's good and I would like to read more please. If you have it planned I would like to know more about what happened while the three of them were apart. Like when Sasuke's eyes got stuck in the Sharingan maybe or just random things. Call it the curious fangirl that lives in my head.
Please update soon.

Is it me or did I forgot to review this earlier? hmm, anyway, good job! the suspense is kinda killing me and Gaara is too adorable with his pyschotic ways..

this is really good. plz update more. also, have they searched the evacuation areas in the hokage monument? i was just wondering baceuse you made it soud like they only searched the village.