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Last time my review got f*cked up.... Well... again...:

Never reviewed before here on AFFnet but now I have to! God... that was so beautifully written but also so sad. I hope Itachi will not die ;_; Please continue soon...
I also saw a little bit of Uchihacest in it but I guess that's just because I'm a fan of that pairing *g* Sorry about that...

And if you add any pairings I'd love to see SasuSaku since that's my fav after ItaSasu ^^"""

I wanted to ask you if you would allow me to host your FF on my Uchiha shrine please: http://www.tsukiyomi.com/ It's not up yet but soon... Please?

Definitely most interesting. Haven't taken a look at your picture yet that inspired this, but I'm intrigued with where this is going. It's interesting to see how the brothers view each other at such a dramatic time in their lives. It would seem as though, despite aging, Sasuke's still that little kid that worshiped his brother.

I prefer a M/F pairing (that is not SasuIno because really, it's just wrong). AFF has an overabundance of M/M, especially in Naruto, that more M/F would be nice. My little perverted mind wouldn't mind SasuSakuIta (or is it ItaSakuSasu?). If you aren't able to come to a conclusion, you could always make this story pairing-less. One reason why I think Sakura should be included in the pairing is because I think she is someone who can forgive, see both sides of an equation after initial shock or impression, allow for second chances even it meant breaking the rules. She is a smart girl, despite what naysayers may think, and she is useful/helpful.

In the end, regarding pairings, it's what you want to write and what you feel comfortable writing. By choosing M/M over M/F or vice versa you may lose some readers, but if you're writing this for yourself, does that even matter? Write for you, write what's comfortable and natural. In essence just be true to your story.

~Wicked

Well i hope it's ItaSakuSasu. But it is your choice. So conflict choose. All possible parings so far seem good to me. Awesome story.

wow, I absolutely, entirely LOVE this story. i cant wait to read more, this was one of the most touching Itachi and Sasuke moments I ever read. awesome!

Damn thing won't let me log in. Anyways, this is good...GREAT!!!! I vote for M/M, but it's entirely up to you. If you do end up doing M/F please don't do Sasuke/Sakura...or Sasuke/Ino...^^; Update soon though.

I would definatly love to see some or any yaoi would be good. Kakasasu will be nice since i haven't seen any good Kakasasu fics lately. I love your first chapter , is so cool...for some reason it reminded me a bit of Uchihacest... oh well I can't for next chapter!!

Its nice to read a fic where Itachi isn't a crazy, sadistic killer. Deep down inside everyone has some kind of loving feelings for their siblings. Sasuke's reaction to Itachi dying was good too. I can't even begin to image how hard it would be to kill your own brother.......even if he killed everyone. Please continue this it's really good.

I really like what you have here, and also the picture. I am actually hoping Itachi doesn't die. Anyway, I would like to cast my vote for M/F, I don't read yaoi, so that would suck if you turned it yaoi, because I like your writing style. Plus there is so much yaoi here already, be different! hehe. Well, I hope to see an update soon!

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