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for Nine Months

by macy

person yukiko
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey you updated !! great chapter there, and the rivals ... priceless !!
person Edward7
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Pulls hair out and screams* You HAVE to update! *Twitch spasm* Soooo good....Must know what happens...*Twitches again then dies*
person Demon
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how do i put this...UPDATE!!!
person yanira
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write some more! This is good... you can almost see your characters come to life...
person silverfox
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY ITS REALLY CUTE I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING AS I READ !!!!!

THIS IS SUCH A GREAT STORY YOU MUST CONTINUE IT PLEASE *PUPPY DOG EYES* WITH A CHERRY ON TOP!!!!


ONCE AGAIN GREAT STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON OKAY

UNILT NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!!
person akuma_river
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO, poor wittle Sasuke. Poor horny Naruto. great fic. keep up the great work. coolsa.
person cutiedraco
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello Again
The line that really stood out for me in this chapter was the one about his heart pounding so loud he couldn't hear anything
there was so emotion implied in that phrase it incited a aww,
I hope I you update soon
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww. thats sooo sweet. i love it when naru is seme.... stamina freak....*snickers* i cant wait to read the next chapter.
person yume
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAI! ^_^ so cute. I loved it! Seme Nauto...intresting *gleam*. But in any case, very adorable, keep it up! *heart*
person Yami Jay
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Got to love Naruto.s reaction when Tsunade-sama told him he couldn't do anything like fighting. And yes, I can understand poor Sasuke,s reation.