rate_review Reviews

I really liked this chapter much better then your first. I especially like how you broght in that Sauske would be a bit "sore" .

to many stories have them screw like bunnines, whithout the consquences that happen when you have marathon screw session.

can hardly wait for the next chapter.

It's almost funny that the only two MPreg stories I'm reading got updated on the same day. Both are from different angles too so that makes everything awesome b/c it's the same premise but different in ideas, plots, and etc. But anyway, this was another great chapter. I laughed at Sasuke at the end, probably not the best thing to do when he's so sore but oh well, it's funny. I think you're setting everything up real well for the rest of the story. I especially want to know what's going to go on at the Jounin exams. For those obnoxious people who were rude to you about the whole MPred plotline, they can kiss it because I think its a comical and yet somewhat serious approach to the Naruto-universe already set up. It's a big issue in several stories I've read, about how Sasuke is going to continue on his bloodline and thus fulfill one of this goals and I think Naruto getting pregnant is a interesting and original way to address this issue. So kudos to you for going out on a limb and doing something most other people won't approach. I hate people who flame. Constructive critisicm is one thing but flaming because you voluntarily read a story in which you find things offensive is just stupid. The minute something happens you don't like, you have the choice to stop reading it. Not to mention those people won't go far in the world with such closed minds. Well, anyway, I think you are doing an excellent job and I hope you keep up the great work! I can't wait for the next edition.

Until Next Time...

Scottishfae

I like this chapter a lot. A submissive Sasuke, for at least one night....
Tsunade must be laughing it up now!!
I wonder if Naruto will get mood swings... If he does, I pitty the poor Sasuke... or anyone else that has the misfortune of crossing his path...

I'm greatful that you updated!! Thank you so very much.

See?!?
First, it was a perverted Sasuke, now it's a perverted Naruto!!(omg... FOUR times?!... whoa o.o)
This fic can't get any better! XD
I love it!
Oh! You're very welcome about the reviews ^^ I'm gald they made you happy!
I LOVE this way this fic is going, its so cute, humorous, AND you get that warn-and-fuzzy feeling.
Keep up the great work! ^^

Much love from
Emina

I LOVE HOW THIS FIC IS TURNING OUT IT WOULD BE AWSOME IF U COULD FIND SOMEONE TO DO A PICTURE OF A PREGNANT NARUTO WITH SASUKE FEELING THE BABY KICK> WELL ANY WAY U KEEP ON DOING UR THING

LOL, poor Sasuke! Love the story.

I love this story. Keep it up. BTW...Did anyone mention to Sasuke that a pregnant person's hormones go into overdrive and that also has an effect on thier libibo.....^_^

that was an amazing start with every line I read I couldn't wait to read what happened next.
hope you update very soon cause i can't wait to see what happens to naruto and sasuke next

UNTIL NEXT TIME SEE YOU!!!!!

Poor Sasuke, he had it coming though, he's a bit deranged when it comes to the whole sex and pregnancy thing.

Hey! awesome story! The explanation for the pregnancy was a good one, and fit with the Naruto story-line. Good job. Can't wait for more chapters!