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for Nine Months

by macy

person bhodi li
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like naruto pregnant stories. I didn't realize that this was such a recently done story and I can't wait to see what Sasuke's reaction is much less the rest of the Rookie Nine. I do hope you continue soon.
person Emina - and is too lazy to sign in ><
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY enjoyed this fic, very very funny ^^

Love how you made everyone in-character and Sasuke a pevert, too funny!

Please, PLEASE continue this!

I really hope it won't stay a one-shot for long.

Cause it's murder where you left it off ><

lol, anyway, good work, and keep it up!

-Emina
person Emina... and is again to lazy to sign in
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, hush why don't you, Ninja?

If you may or may not have read (I'm thinking more the latter) the warnings, she said their ages where different, 18 and 19...
SO it's not 12 year old MPREG...
And MPREG is not wrong, and whether it works out or not, is up to the author.
If you don't like it, you didn't need to waste your time telling the author how bad MPREG is, just ignore it and move along(I think you could just hear the description of the fic scream "MPREG!" or is that only me? Or are you _that_ blind?).
It's as simple as that... And I think alot of people here would agree with me as well.

Keep your negative opinions to yourself, I highly doubt anyone here would like to hear it.

-One-miffed-Emina...
person SpiritFighter
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh! I like it a whole lot! I am very picky with my mpreg fics, so feel special and stuff.... ^_^(_) anyways, update soon!
person nicki-gurl
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great story. i hop eyou post the next chapter soon because i can not wait for more.
person moonprincess90
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAHHH!! I like that it was real cute! ^_~ with just a little lime. LOL are you going to wright more?? are is that it? I could be funny to read about the hole 9months. ^^
person tenohikari
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot and hysterically funny - you must continue!
person MimiruChan
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xDD OMFG! I usually dont like MPEGs at all! But this is one great! >D You must update soon!!
person Wist Star
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is actually good. Let the inspiration to write this story spill out cuz i liked theooc talk when naruto and sasuke were talking it was godo to see it from their point of view and i hope to read more in what happenes in the later 8 months in this fanfic XD!!
person hogo-chan
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! i love it! please continue!! i usually HATE mpreg fics but this one is so cool! please update fast!