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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles hysterically* HAHAHAHAHA!!! I cant wait to see his reaction!
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don't worry, you did a fine job. and funny how i like fics whereby Naruto accidentally got pregant. it is sooooo endearing, i guess?
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SPIZZLEHIMEN! You must continue! <33 I would not be satisfide with just a oneshot! I need to know Sasuke's reaction in the next chapter! xDDD
On a side note there were a few sentences that just...felt like you out in an extra word that didn't need to be there, or forgot a word. It was still good though! Please continue! <33
On a side note there were a few sentences that just...felt like you out in an extra word that didn't need to be there, or forgot a word. It was still good though! Please continue! <33
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! It cut off my review ;___; *sigh* well all I really said was:
Please continue! I would be most sad if you leave this as a one-shot! I just have to see Sasuke's reaction to what Tsunade told him xD;;
And you might want to re-read before you post up your fic. THere were a few sentences that hand an extra word in it that really didn't need to be there (or was it just me?) and some that seemed like they where missing a word. But please continue!! I am seriously looking forward to this! :HEART:
Please continue! I would be most sad if you leave this as a one-shot! I just have to see Sasuke's reaction to what Tsunade told him xD;;
And you might want to re-read before you post up your fic. THere were a few sentences that hand an extra word in it that really didn't need to be there (or was it just me?) and some that seemed like they where missing a word. But please continue!! I am seriously looking forward to this! :HEART:
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I laughed at a lot of parts, especially the last. <3 Anyway, pretty good writing, just slightly OOC... Loved the ramen thing. XD Update soon!
-lili
-lili
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHA! Another MPREG fic! How cool! Hehehehe...I also have one here in Aff.net, and SasuNaru at that. XD
I loved Naruto's reaction, and their POV's. So cute!
And yes, Naruto fandom needs more MPREG fics! XD
So, keep on it, do continue. XD
I loved Naruto's reaction, and their POV's. So cute!
And yes, Naruto fandom needs more MPREG fics! XD
So, keep on it, do continue. XD
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you how happy I was to see your fic up there. I certainly don't think there are enough Naruto mpregs out there and I can't wait to read more of your fic. I've really enjoyed it so far. So keep going, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I need more! I wanna see what their baby will look like! A boy, or a girl? Will they actually have twins or what? WAAAAA~!
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*melts into puddle of goo* don't normally like male pregnancies, but yours totally works. so cute! so sweet! yesh, you should definitely be writing more!!
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this seems to be quite a good fic,. So on my behalf I would expect you to continue with the fic, I can hardly wait to see what is going to happen between those two
Please don't let it be a One Shot. thank you
Please don't let it be a One Shot. thank you