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for Nine Months

by macy

person Vox
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooo cute! I definetly think you should write more lemon oneshots, by the way... and poor naruto... he's really fertil.
person sky_040
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its interesting but you can't tell whos talking?
person yaoilover12
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I liked this story much better than your other one. Even though it was mpreg (which I don't particularly care for) and SasuNaru instead of NaruSasu, it was pretty good. Sorry if I sounded harsh in my review for the other fic, but I just did not like that one at all. At all.
person MedicninM
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just stayed up the whole night and read the ENTIRE Nine Months! ^_^ hee hehe... Needless to say, I loved it! normally mpreg ff doesn't keep me entertained for too long, but yours did! Anyways keep up the good work, i look forward to reading more from you. And i really REALLY hope you decide to add on with at least one more smex scene!! >_< I love sasunaru!! ^_^
person KitsuneFun
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you consider updating... it will be cute to find out what happens next in the lives of the Uzumaki-Uchihas', hopefully the next kid looks like Naruto
person kedra
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, really nice fic! hehe, could you have a lil pity on naruto-kun and have his next one his little clone? i think it would be awfully cute to have a mini naruto amongst chibi-sasuke clones. :D
person Muraki Asato
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update PLEASE!
:::whines:::
I want to know what happens next! This is one of the best written mpreg's that I've ever come across, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person mE
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! You can't leave us hanging there. Please continue. I want to see (or read c(: ) what's wrong with Naruto. I love your writing and I hope you write more. Thank you <3
person Akina
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gezz....why did you stop there?!! I want to know what will happen next!!!! Please update soon!
person Mija
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oohhh man, I am a recently new fan of Naruto and as you can see I am going threw the list of Naruto fics absorbing everything written, or written well, about it, and I am soooooo dying to read what the heck is happening here...why is Naruto crying out? and what does Tsnuada want? Naru is having the baby early huh?? cause foxes have thiers earlier than humans or something right??? ok I am sooooooo needing to read the rest of this..please please please update this wonderful fic..pretty please??? and btw do you have the link to that Naruto Manga site?? is it translated? and is it free? would love to read it please email it to me and any update alerts if you could, if not I will check back and hope to read an update of this fic soon, ty for the wonderful read, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)