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for Nine Months

by macy

person okami kaze
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg. that was awesome! i take it the baby's about to come huh? can't wait for an update!! good job!

~Okami

PS. try not to change the POV so frequently. it's a little distracting
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is not fair! Have you forgotten this story!!!! Please update. I understand if you have writters block but if you don't try to write something down you'll just get sick of this story and stop writting. That is the last thing I want to happen. Please come back and update.
person Akira Vadel
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH! Why must you stop it so!! Please continue! I was actually thinking of drawling a doujinshi where Naruto gets pregnate. If you wouldn't mind I can draw your story. ^-^ If not don't worry about it. Just an idea. Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!

~Akira~
person Chibi
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG Why'd you stop there!!!! I practically had a heart attack when I saw that it stopped at the time when it's obvious Naruto's gonna be giving birth...Please Update..
person bookworm51485
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey

Happy to see a new chapter after so long waiting for it. I really like your story, it's one of the better mpreg stories that I've read. I usually tend to hate the 1st person POV, preferring the 3rd person all knowing but you do a job with it so I don't hate it. I was wondering how far along Naruto was in the pregnancy, that's one thing I wasn't completely sure on. I know that he has a big stomach and it seems like he and Sasuke can't have sex so I'm thinking that he's in his 9th month. I can't wait til the next chapter to find out what's wrong with Naruto, is he in labor or is there some kind of problem and that's why Tsunade needs to see him? So good job and please update soon, I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter:)
person Muraki Asato
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I'm dying here!
person izumi
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww... birth time already??? what's the date??? ^^
person Ash
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MACY! Write more soon I beg of you-pout-I can't handle rereading the same old chapters over and over again. I gotta read a new one before my eyes fall out!-begging-Please write more soon!
person Berylia
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Naruto is going to have the baby in the next chapter!
I love this story, it's cute. Thanks!
person twisted-sheets
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That took long enough...and is Naruto about to give birth? dun dun dun...

I missed this fic...*sniff* so happy I've read it...