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I really like your story!! How do I add yo to my author alert list? My e-mail is narutootaku@hotmail.com =^~^=

I love your story. I like how Sasuke is so overly protective towards Naruto, and the way Sasuke made Naruto sit on his lap was so cute. You are a really good writer, but you should write your chapters faster. I wrote 8 chapters in the time it took you to write one, but your story is clearly better than mine. Umm... is Sakuraga-sama out of the story for good. It was kindly weird how he turned nice at the end, but if he really want to be with Naruto, than it does make sense, but the way he was acting like such an asshole does not make sense. Anyway, why did Naruto not wanted to sit on Sasuke’s lap to start off with. It seems to me that he loves doing intimate things like that with Sasuke or at the most making fun of Sasuke for something like that. I love the way Sasuke said, “Trying to keep my family warm, what else does it look like?” and the way he grumbled it out, as if automatic, unaware of how those words made an impact to Naruto. It sounds like something one of my friends would do. Ok that it for now, bye.

you do have a point, hehehe, cant believe that naru-chan actually sassed the sakugama guy, i hope they would become uh-hum! "acquainted" in the future, yosh you did good on this one cant believe sasuke laughed, that would be a day, hahaha, pls good luck on your next chapter make it a little longer this time, cause i really cant get enough of this story,its so addicting! ja!

Eek so cute! *^_^*. I love how Rain Lord Jr. turned out. He should be like an adoptaive uncle and totally spoil the kid rotten, that would be so adorable. Anyway love it, can't wait to see the next chapter (Sasuke+shopping for baby things). You rock! I would also like to recieve alerts as new chapters of this most awesome fics are published. Keep up the asounding work!

hahaha!! naruto is so funny!!!

wah! super awesome! update mucho fastly!

Wow!!! what a cool story, its so cool how Naruto's all girlly!!
next chapter, next chapter!
*hoping for more revelations about the baby!! what does he/she look like?? ahh its killing me.
btw: i thought for sure there'd be some kinda short story thing about Naruto not knowing which bathroom to use (i think its actually the previous chapter tho..), but no, sasuke rescued him before Naruto got to use the bathroom, it would have been funny tho..^.^

ahh.. and please email me when u have updates!! write more!! its awesome!

This is really great so far. The first MPREG I've read, and I totally love it! Please write more soon!

*laughs so hard she had tears in her eyes* Morrrreee OMG WE NEED MORE OF THIS XD Poor sasuke, I feel so sorry for him, he needs some hot naru-sex *giggles impishly* I'm not a huge fan of m-pregs but this one just takes the cake...god....you better update soon...*falls over laughing again* Go evil rain lords sons!

The last two chapters completely and entirely sucked.