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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I've read up to chapter 3, the story is pretty good...but here's some constructive crticism...though this story is good and so far is keeping me interested, there are certain parts that are structured awkwardly, so it's doesn't really flow, so it kinda takes away from the story. Grammar's not bad put it isn't excellent either...not that I'm miss grammar queen, but so far I haven't noticed any obvious spelling errors, so that's a plus. Looking forward to reading the rest of your fic.
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo, you can't leave me like this! I love it, this story is original, weird and funny in a strange way... not to mention I love those hot scenes between Sakura and Sasuke.
:) Update please
:) Update please
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you abandoning this? Please say you're not... *makes teary puppy eyes* Oh, and BTW, why is this categorized as NC-17?? Seems that you skip most of the actual lemon scenes--this should be an 'R' at most. Of course, I'd rather you'll get round to writing (and posting) most of the lemon scenes implied so far. XD
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE finish this! I need to know who he is!
Great story, really good writing.
Great story, really good writing.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to finis this?
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luv your story, please update . I have not read a story like this with a monster and sasuke{ very original} I think there should be more F/M fanfics on this site.
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! more, more, MORE!!! hahaha hmm.. yea, you should update now, thanks! ^_^
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was amazingggggg i love how you made Sakura so strong and powerful and not all girly whenever she is around Sasuke anymore that was so coooooooooooleeeeeeeeee I can not wait until the next chapter oh and I also love how you now have Sasuke chasing after Sakura I have been dying to read a fanfic like that for ages. Arigatoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't remember if I reviewed before, but I like the sexual tension in this. Bah humbug to all those rabid yaoi fans who just want SasuNaru, SasuNaru, and more SasuNaru. There's like 500 tonnes of them out there, so they should stop bothering you and just read those. In other words, don't take their mindless flames to heart. I love SasuSaku, but ItaSaku is yummy too! Keep up the sexual tension!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a short review: The first chapter was frickin' HOT, and SUCH a tease. I WANT MORE!!! And no more teasing!