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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow you're a talented writer. though it threw me off with the whole beast thing. is that some sort of inner conciousness, for sasuke?
i guess i have to wait and see.
I'll be reading, update soon.
Sasuke/Sakura all the way :)
i guess i have to wait and see.
I'll be reading, update soon.
Sasuke/Sakura all the way :)
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cant figure out who the guy is!
Nicely done, a couple grammar mistakes and a bit corny, but awesomenonetheless.<3
Nicely done, a couple grammar mistakes and a bit corny, but awesomenonetheless.<3
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"He spoke feeling her body go slack slightly; he never realized how small she was compared to him."
Hum... maybe it's Sakura/Kakashi?? ^_____^
And yeah, like someone else wrote: don't listen to those yaoi fans, because your story is really great! Did you not say who the guy was on purpose or are you continuing the fic? Hope it's the latter. :)
Hum... maybe it's Sakura/Kakashi?? ^_____^
And yeah, like someone else wrote: don't listen to those yaoi fans, because your story is really great! Did you not say who the guy was on purpose or are you continuing the fic? Hope it's the latter. :)
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I can't wait for you to update! Update soon!!!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that is just plain mean! Who is Sakura seducing? Can you leave us hanging right there? Ketchi!!!(or however you spell it) Evil author! Ok, I reviewed, I like, I want to read the rest so update you EVIL EVIL AUTHOR!!! (In case you don't know, I am just giving you a hard time, ^_^ I am not flaming or anything like that)
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't listen to those yaoi-crazed females, you've done a great job so far with this fic and there's no reason you should screw it up. Let them have their unpleasant surprises.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more baby, yeah, just like before ,only harder! Please ...please?
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hopefully sasusaku?
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm oishii desu....
hehe I anxiously await the next chapter!
hehe I anxiously await the next chapter!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good to something *not* yaoi. >)