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for Control

by mehmeh

person c00ki3
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^___^ It has a different approach than most Naruto fanfiction, I'm loving it so much.
person Yumi
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story and I wanna read more please^^
person hyperkaoru
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I tell you, your fic turn me on. Do you think I'm a pervert? Oh god, I wish I were Sasuke, or better, Naruto.
person X
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chpter 9:

Hey there. This is a really great story. Please do not abandon it.

The whole thing where Naruto and Kyuubi work together to seduce Sasuke is amazing and clever. Your ideas are very unique. Now that Sasuke thinks that he is in control what will happen next? Please update soon!
person someone
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love ur story, so please don't give up on it! update soon?
person Jinx
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's one of my favourite SasuNaru stories up to date, and I just want you to know how much I love it. It's extremely well written, the character portrait is SOOOOO GOOD, and it's so angsty and dirty that I keep reading it over and over again.*Bowbow* Please continue, and write more smut! :) Love, jinx
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm very proud of this story. I never thought of Sasuke reacting in such a way, but it is very possible. Keep up the great work! I hope to see more great things.

~Akira~
person lucifel
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic~!! i love ur unique story plot...and yes the lemony goodness too...anyways please continue!!! ^O^
person fib
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
arrrrgh! A pre-smut chapter ending! Torture! This fic is twisted but I'm loving every minute. I especially love your Kyuubi... rrrowr. Can't wait for the next chapter... it's gonna be a knockout, I just know it.
person kt0kichi
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really great..First you make us think that Sasuke flat out rejects him and naruto is going to be crushed..And thats how it was gonna stay.

I really love how Naruto snapped at them all. Phew. ^_^

Update soon!! This is great