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by mehmeh

person Ezj
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An evil cliffie but those are the greatest
Hmm will be waiting somewhat impatiently
to see were all this is heading ^_^
person ayonoi
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was an interesting chapter. Poor Naruto, torn between his conscience and the Kyuubi. I wonder who will win in the end? I think Naruto might have to force himself away from the influence of the Kyuubi but I wonder how given how difficult things are with Sasuke.

Sasuke has gone from rejecting Naruto to just wanting him in a very dominating manner. I guess he is also confused on how to react to Naruto's attraction (but he seems to have accepted it albeit grudgingly). There is still so much going on and it will be fun to find out what it is.

Ohhh the banana scene XD. I wonder if that was done on purpose??? Good going, can't wait to see the next chapter!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg ........that was sexual manipulation at it's best right there. the whole time i was reading it i was thinking "the boy is good" then we got to the part with naruto showing off the goods...:drool:... my brain just stopped working ^__^ man, oh man. i can't wait for the next chapter. and not just for the sex *vaguely hears somebody screams "you liar!" in the background* , but also to find out why naruto is doing this now and etc. so update soon, kay? now excuse me while i go back and read chap. 9 again
person Vermillion Spiral
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had me drooling then you ended it! You sadistic creep! I'm just kidding, I love you, we all love you, you're the bestest author in the world. Yes, no one compares to you. :Strokes and caresses your ego loveingly: There's nothing like a good ego jerking to make an author give us the goods! ^_^ And after that we need it!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blink* O.O Gah!!! You evil, evil person!!! You finally update, and for what? A cliffhanger!!! -.- That is sooooooo not fair......... ^^ Thanks for updating, I really do appreciate it. No, really, I do! *gives you some more chocolates* See??? ^___~ Glad my explanation for my name made sense... Keep up the good work!!!
person Suicidal Skies
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, you're getting better and better ^___^ Keep it up m'dear
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea, hey, where's the sex?! (throws smelly sock at author) heh, the ending was a unexpected. it seemed funny as to how Naruto's moods swings so randomly. Please update soon.
person Vermillion Spiral
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, the end of chapter 8 cracked me up. This is one of my favorite fics, it just keeps getting better every chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
person Bunnicle
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was funny. Love the ending of chapter 8! just too funny! can't wait for the next chapter! it took some time getting used to, cause i am generally a SasukexNaruto fan, but this one is cool. please write the next chapter soon. oh, by the way, i loved the "arguement" between Kakashi and Naruto. that was funny too.
person Tonya
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story in the beginning, but now I'm finding myself drifting away. I don't like the way that everyone is acting...but you have your reasons. I'll stick around and see what happenes.