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by mehmeh

person dvana
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fic, good characterization and a really nice plot execution. Seriously, I don't think I've come across a Kyyubi fic this good yet. ^^ I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this one... oh, and the sex, of course. ^^ I always feel sooo sorry for Naruto... I think despite the plethora of manflesh on that show (especially if you tack on a few years ^^) he remains my favorite.
person blisblop
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kyubi is scary.Run Sasuke!
person Demon
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah your right...i can't wait for the next chappy -^-^- this a great fic!
person akuma_river
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I still say this is a plot ridden awesome story. So now Naruto becomes evil and the world has damned itself. Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.
person PerriotLeFou
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loves it. Absolutely!! Finally Naruto just said enough! The rampage is going to be fun. *repeat first statement* Nice discription of the Kyuubi. And I've said it before, but I love the Voodoo doll thing. Very nice *claps!*

Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_# Perriot Le Fou
person maya
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say about chapters 8 is: YEAH, BABY! Go, Kuuybi! Put some spine in that boy!
person SakuraBoy
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still like this fic... i drew you an art of fandom before this chapter was released.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/16765967/
Hope you like it.

~Krispy, the Sakura Boy
person Toki Mirage()
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Fucking. AWESOME!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!! ^^
person Taylor
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're wonderful...I love how you play that (evil, lowlife scumbag) Sasuke along. It's wonderful. Your writing is really great and...*beats Sasuke with the Sun* ARRGGH!! This idiot is a totally demeaning person who cant get a clue!
Anyway, I think the Kyuubi is being pretty harsh with Naruto. I mean, I get tough love and all, but, then again, he IS trying to help Naruto to get back at Sasuke reversibly right? (I may have put that idea in my brain myself) But, if I'm right, I think the Kyuubi should not crush Naruto's self esteem.....but, then again (look at me! all ambivalent and all) you can apply that tought love principal again. You may tell us why he's doing things this way later. ^_~

Well, dont take what I say to heart unless it's helpful, and, I hope it didnt confuzzle you.
*give you Garra plushie and a large coke*

Keep up the good work!
person Ghonchi
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! another chapter! *huggies*
that thing in the middel of the story, something about 'a mother is not like this' and that big horse cock thing reminded me 'bout
a dream I had. ^_^;; well, let say my dreams are pretty screwed up (like Rock Lee and me in a mad house, Lee gets crused under
a falling bathtub with a wet Neji in. and something about submarines and barbie dolls).
And I say like this, Me want lemon! now! -.- gimme lemon!
anygate, It's a good chapter, even tho' the lack of smut.

ever read Gantz? I have been reading it straigth of in two days now. there is about 192 chapters and I read 100 of them yesterday
and remining today #_#, man, I gotta get a life!

C'ya! n_n