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yay, an update!!! i love the ending!! so funny, i could just imagine sasuke's face when naruto said that!!! update soon!!

wow, that chapter was really intense! i loved it! you also gave a really nice description of kyuubi. please update soon and i'd really like to see some more sasunaru in the future (but don't worry, i won't throw anything at you) ^_~

*laughs*
*worships the great author in return*

I'm still waiting on that kakanaru side-fic that you started. *poke*

love the new line you added in the beginning about the house plant *laughs* oh..you also took out the big words. cools. I like this version a lot better than the original.

the ending is just..*laughs* so much better than the original. ^_^

thank you!

p.s. i just remember that you don't advertise your fic on lj communities. *poke* you should!

Oh yeah! Kyuubi and Naruto have teamed up!! shit's gonna hit the fan soon.*rubs her hands together gleefully* this chapter was sooo good and the ending was priceless. i wish i coulda seen Sasuke's face. man, that fox has got someway with words doesn't he? that damned sexy, manipulative, sexy, conviving and did i mention sexy beast. i just luv those KyuuNaru moments. i eagerly await the next chapter. i cant wait to see who the next victim is. ^__^

Ready or not Konoha, Naruto's striking back and no one can stop him now that Kyuubi advising him what to do!! UPDATE SOON!!

Yay!! new chappie up. Your sooo great. Which means i got my naruto fix for the day...*or at least for the next hour*..*nervous laugh*...hehe And right before english too... hmm gives me new stuff to think about while pretending to listen to the professor. ^_^.

Now as for Kyuubi... need i say how great he is.... or should I just throw more Kyuubi plushies at u to show my love....lol

ja mata... gtg to class

I was ashamed of myself too! ;~; (Although I found it funny how you updated a few hours later XD)

>:D Evil Naruto... It really makes me wonder how this story will end, considering you have a plot now despite you calling it a PWP. XD Will we see a sparkling, happy Naruto or a wicked, cruel Naruto? So far, I see the second one being plausible. I can just imagine Naruto on a throne with girls or boys chained up aklongside it. XD

Man...this is just a sadistic story (I love it)....I pity Naruto.....that boy has been though too much....

However, you say you don't have a plot for this....I think your lying. (hehehehe)

From what I can tell the point of the story is this: Not everyone gets a happy ending or purpose in their lives, even though they deserve it. Naruto fights to protect an illusion that keeps him from falling into the darkness. But Kyuubi keeps strips those illusions away, leaving Naruto with nothing but darkness to depend on. Sasuke and the others are unknowing helping the demon in this task.

From what I can tell, if Naruto is able to 'bring low Sasuke' he's his destroying the one thing that keeps him from becoming an evil that the world has never seen. The leash that keeps him from becoming evil is simply this- Naruto's ideals. But sadly, Naruto probably won't realized this until its too late....

But please.... I am begging you not to forget the "Hinata factor". Out off all the people in that damn village, Hinata was the only one who actually looked up to Naruto and respected him. (Yet, Naruto was so dense, he didn't see this...hehehe)

Is Hinata going to be in this story? Her presense could somehow be something that keeps Naruto from the darkness. Naruto wouldn't have to fallen in love with Hinata to accoplish this. (Remember there are different types of connections - parental, companionship, being....) Or it can simply be the realization that someone out there actually gives a damn about how he truly is.

However, if Kyuubi sees Hinata as a threat .....good by sweet, shy girl.

So basically, your plot is this....Kyuubi wants to live through Naruto (Maybe his trying to merge Naruto and his soul into one being...*hint,hint*) Naruto struggle to hold his ideals together (his ideals preventing that 'merging'), but slowly those dreams/ideals are stripping away. And everyone else is mainly helping the Kyuubi by slowly destorying Naruto's faith and trust in them. So what Naruto needs is something to trigger the alarm bells...*cough* Gaara *cough*...that will warn him of the path of darkness and evil he is unknowning falling into, thus completly locking away the demon being inside Naruto, but able to keep Kyuubi's power.

Or you could really screw with us and make Naruto fall into darkness and become a evil that even scares Kyuubi....

I don't buy that crap about him not knowing the notion of love and calling it useless. He is a living being...therefore capuble of emotion...besides the greatest downfall of any bad boy is not knowing the power and strengh of love.... Therefore, Kyuubi would be a fool it dismiss it and not use it to its true potential. But, is a demon...if he can trick himself and Naruto that they love each other....well.....the sky is the limit.

"I love myself, therefore I love you.' Damn, I am soooo stealing that line.....hehehehe.

Sorry about this review being so long...hope this helps you out....if not....whatever....

Update soon, bud.

This is awesome, just awesome. I love evil Kyubi and his voodoo dolls. Great job with this chapter, can't wait to read more!

Another superb chapter. Poor Naruto finally gave in, poor thing, he needs a cookie...cause cookies make the world go 'round. The ending was a very nice touch, a last minute addition I see! But oh so good. Now we just need to figure out if Sasuke is going to accept or not?! It would be so funny if he did, and so just, yummy. I'm interested in how you're going to wrap this fic up in the amount of chapters you would like to finish it in (did that make sense?). It seems like a lot more plot to cover in just 2-3 chapters! Not only do you have the NaruSasu crazyness to figure out, but you also have to address what's exactly going to happen to Naru and the Kyuubi in the end. I have to figure that Tsunade is keeping a watch on him and noticing his strange behaviour. Though since a majority of it happens in his dreams, then there may be nothing to observe. However, you did point out that he had carved that Voodoo thing into the floor w. his own nails, indicating that the Kyuubi has some control over Naru's physical actions outside of the dream realm, so that could be monitored. Oh, the possibilities to think and ponder about! Oh well, I'll just need to sit down when I get a chance and reread everything! I'm off for now, great chapter...as always!

Until Next Time...

Scottishfae