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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RAHHHHHHHHHHH! You just did it! This fic has
become my favorite Naruto story! At first it was
"I Bleed Black" but by making Naruto evil you
have done even better! Although, I had never
seen an evil Naruto before, so I was working on
a fic where Kyuubi give him a simular speech
about the village and Naruto finally gives the fox
full control, then he reaks havock upon everyne!
Now I'm worried that people will think I've copied
from you! Oh well.
Anyway, your talent as a writer truly makes you
shine! And don't worry, I love Naruto's talks with
Kyuubi just as much as I do smutt - I can wait
for the lemon! And it seems that niether Sasuke
nor Naruto will win this battle for control, but our
beloved FOX! *Starts to cheer*
Oh the violence and drama in this chapter! And
the last thing Naruto said to Sasuke, "I want to
fuck you..." It was the perfect way to end this
chapter! And how will Sasuke react to it now?!
And wow, you got this chapter out so fast! Nice
job! God, I luv you.
Kyuubi: -_- Ignore that fool
Welp, gotta run! Update soon!
become my favorite Naruto story! At first it was
"I Bleed Black" but by making Naruto evil you
have done even better! Although, I had never
seen an evil Naruto before, so I was working on
a fic where Kyuubi give him a simular speech
about the village and Naruto finally gives the fox
full control, then he reaks havock upon everyne!
Now I'm worried that people will think I've copied
from you! Oh well.
Anyway, your talent as a writer truly makes you
shine! And don't worry, I love Naruto's talks with
Kyuubi just as much as I do smutt - I can wait
for the lemon! And it seems that niether Sasuke
nor Naruto will win this battle for control, but our
beloved FOX! *Starts to cheer*
Oh the violence and drama in this chapter! And
the last thing Naruto said to Sasuke, "I want to
fuck you..." It was the perfect way to end this
chapter! And how will Sasuke react to it now?!
And wow, you got this chapter out so fast! Nice
job! God, I luv you.
Kyuubi: -_- Ignore that fool
Welp, gotta run! Update soon!
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH, KYUUBI, TAKE ME NOW! *ahem* I-I mean, um, g-great chapter. I can't even pinpoint what I loved the most, because I'd just be recapping the entire thing. Just, yeah, that Kyuubi. You're doing an amazing job with him. >:3 And that little exchange between Naruto and Sasuke at the end? I think I cackled for a good five minutes. I love it when Naruto has the upper hand. :D So, in conclusion, you're amazing and I love you forever and ever, amen. <33 *looks at your info* Ack! I so need to friend you on LJ. ;3
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_o
eep! That's a bad Naruto. A very bad Naruto. I cry.
And am, of course, eager to see what happens next. While part of me cheers for Kyuubi to have his wicked way, the other part of me is yelling for Naruto to come to his freaking senses. I'm quite looking forward to the next part. =]
--Ruby
eep! That's a bad Naruto. A very bad Naruto. I cry.
And am, of course, eager to see what happens next. While part of me cheers for Kyuubi to have his wicked way, the other part of me is yelling for Naruto to come to his freaking senses. I'm quite looking forward to the next part. =]
--Ruby
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pure fucking GENIUS! You have some serious talent. Love it. Love it. LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next chapter! =D
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I just love seeing a smug Naruto, especially when he's being a bitch about it. He's being submissive, but in control about it. *rubs hands together* Mwahahahahaha! ...I can't do anything but grin now. XD I wonder how I missed this update. ;_; Oh well, better late than never that I found it.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mah I love it! This is a side of Sasuke that I haven't seen done or if it has been done hasn't been portrayed nearly this good. I love the fox of course. And Naruto is just a doll. Keep up the good work!!!!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this story is turning out, it just keeps getting better and better. I like how you write the scheeming on Naruto's part, and the last few lines where Sasuke realizes that Naruto has planned the whole thing... priceless! I really like how you write your arguments, they're really dynamic and work very well, so I hope we'll see more of those! The arguments between Kakashi and Naru to is very interresting as well, because he sees so much. I hope we get more of those, because Naruto sounds so refreshingly insane!
I like a lot!
I like a lot!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooohooo!! this is goood i like it a lot. damn sasuke in denial is so funny. and naruto going sly and evil ish....ooo thats hot. continue soon!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was amazing...but I do feel kinda sorry for Naruto for his bloodied face and for Sasuke because of the games Naruto is playing on him. But amazing and update soon
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HMmm...Hmm... Naruto's a whore!?!? Nah... More like an innocent virgin?? Eh, well, I love how you portray Sasuke as a bastard... But he'll get better, right?? He won't stay that bastard way forever right?? 'Cause he's soo unhott when he's being a bastard to Naruto!! Man, Naruto of all people!! The innocent guy!! Hahahah, well, go Kyuubi!! He likes to play with Naruto ya? They're plotting together, which is a plus! A minus to the bastard Sasuke, and a plus to everything else!! Update it!! ^___^ Gotta love your fice! ^^