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for Control

by mehmeh

person darkangel
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAZZ RITE SASUKE, FUCK DAT WHORE. *grabs naruto and ties him up*

*cough* got a bit carried away. lol, hopefully some........steamy...action coming up??? *wink*
person Gitona
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh yes!Finally..This chapt. was great..though no sex..XD...Its ok about not emailing..I check here alot anyways X3..I will always be a rabid fan girl!>^^> Update now biiatch! >D
person gothic_marshmallow
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... just wow. XD just cool craziness!! i love how naruto's becoming more and more evil. it's so sexy XDD hmmm... maybe he should punish sasuke for being a stuck-up bastard? *hands naruto whips and chains* *gringrin*

good job ommmmg. keep going keep going D:
person kai
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great update!! i love the last line!! made me laugh!! udpate soon!
person Kurisupi
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I shall let THIS be know first... I generaly find fanfics so supremely iritating that i want to murder the writer in a fit if my highest unamusement. You, my dear friend, deserve no such punishment. You kept me highly entertained, and made me want to jump into Kyubi-sama's brain... kukuku... I really love your story, please write moe. (you have my permission XD ) Ah! Have you ever read the Michael Moorcock Elric series? (old fantasy tragic hero novels) Kyubi is reminding me more and more of Arioch, the Duke of Chaos. I'm in love with his personality. You're doing very well, please keep up the hard work!
person maya
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heheheheeh. That last chapter was brilliant. It seems it's Naruto now, who's gaining control!
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to see what naruto does next. i love your story and i hope you keep on writing^_^V
person TenshiKaitou
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
goodness gracious. this get more twisted everytime i read it, and i absolutely love it to bits. an evil and scheming Naruto is just so appealing, so please update soon.
person darkangel
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i swear, da only good thing about not getting daily updates is dat i won't die from excessive nosebleed. it's so cute..............in a very twisted, fucked-up way. and although, naruto's..............slightly........a lil out of character........but i like him dis way......in fact, it's quite weird how he can be OOC but still has that naruto canon character feel. neway, i love your story. i love your writing. i love everything about this fanfic. please update soon.........i've heard dat daily nosebleeds are good for u............somehow..........................please?
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh. the delicious ebil-ness that is naruto. ^__^ i absolutely heart this story. it has this wonderful angsty feel about it and is so beautifully twisted. i just cant wait to read more :coughs: sasuke torture :coughs: of the story.