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by mehmeh

person hogo-chan
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! thank you so much for updating! this chapter was fscking amazing! that was so hot at the end with kakashi and naruto! gah! this fic is beyond the coolest! i love you soooo much for updating! please update the next chapter fast!!!
person Jadetiger
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When waiting got a good fic to update, it can never be soon enough! Another exelent chapter. and i love how naruto's personality is changing! this is really starting to get suspeniceful(is that a word?). lol poor confused kakashi!

YA HO!! VOODIO!!

and on a side note, if you download naruot you'll have noticed that its been licensed... you have any idea where i can countinue downloading it??
person Suicidal Skies
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's the never ending Tia! Wheee!

You're improving and it's showing. Naruto is starting to embrace is seductiveness and the "evilness" You're strumming this along nicely.

And no need to thank meh, and hehe, you earned it O.O It's beautiful. ^_^
person Gitona
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God......O_O...must have more!I am so enjoying this with my sadistic sick mind.Oh huu huu that was good.Mmm..I bet Naruto looks hot saying all that shit to Kakashi. X3 Damn I must say Sasuke is a bitch in here man.Usually I can predict if the ending to a story is goin to end up sad or happy etc but hmm..on this one im slightly lost and to that I must tip my hat!*tips hat devishly* Heh.Please update soon.I must read moe of this.I wish you would email me when you do update but you dont have to.....*puppy dog eyes*...I mean..im just a perverted rabid-fan girl after alll....*mischeviouos grin*..Heh.
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think naru-chan is playing a nice-ass mind game. am i right? i do the same on certain people^_^V
person gothic_marshmallow
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

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*grabs sakura voodoo doll and needles* *runs off* BWAHAHAH *stabbing sounds are heard*

*runs back*

omg the narukaka... craziness!!! ommmmggg *nosebleeds* and i dont even care for that pairing! you are a MASSSTAAAH!! XD

i was surprised kakashi was able to resist naruto's advances! jeez, with his nose stuck in a pervy book all the time, i'd think he'd welcome the blowjob. o_o XD;; but i guess that proves he's a good teacher! he doesn't screw his students... >> wow that's a low standard. XD;

OMG SASUNARU HOT AND SMEXY SCENE NEXT CHAPTER... please? :D its my DRUG... *eyes spin*

everyones gotta love the kyuubi. i dunno what those lil kids are thinking. that kyuubi's a supah sexxxay manipulative beast!! >:DD

now for some subliminal messages: 123SASUNARU456SEX789SCENE101112YAY!!!

*hands blahblah candy and roses* i love you for the new chapter! :D KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! *run!tackle!glomp!* :D


person gothic_marshmallow
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

gah my last review was crapped up (parts got cut out and stuff! hmph). so you get another one! :D

*grabs sakura voodoo doll and needles* *runs off* BWAHAHAH *stabbing sounds are heard*

*runs back*

omg the narukaka... craziness!!! ommmmggg *nosebleeds* and i dont even care for that pairing! you are a MASSSTAAAH!! XD

i was surprised kakashi was able to resist naruto's advances! jeez, with his nose stuck in a pervy book all the time, i'd think he'd welcome the blowjob. o_o XD;; but i guess that proves he's a good teacher! he doesn't screw his students... wow that's a low standard. XD;

OMG SASUNARU HOT AND SMEXY SCENE NEXT CHAPTER... please? :D its my DRUG... *eyes spin*

everyones gotta love the kyuubi. i dunno what those lil kids are thinking. that kyuubi's a supah sexxxay manipulative beast!! >:DD

now for some subliminal messages: 123SASUNARU456SEX789SCENE101112YAY!!!

*hands blahblah candy and roses* i love you for the new chapter! :D KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! *run!tackle!glomp!* :D

(turns out the review thing picks up html stuff! o_o so my last review was missing the stuff i put in! sorry gahhh)

person rainbird
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story actually has a plot....it makes the story better. ^_^
person michirukoshi
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh..Another chapter..
Another wonderful way to retain a nosebleed. *lol*
Your writing is wonderful..simplistic, yet indepth. I love how you
personified the fox, and his negotiations with naruto! ^.^
I cannot wait for the next chapters! Keep up the fantastic work,ne? :D
Loove!
~michi~
person just me
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
up date soon...more i need more