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by mehmeh

person MultifacetedTune
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! OMG, I love this fic!!!!! It's sooooo good!!! I started reading it back when it was a one-shot, but couldn't bring myself to finish it because it was so sad.....however, I absolutely -adore- your writing style, so when I discovered that you had decided to continue it, I read it right away!!! ^___^ I think the way that you portray Kyuubi and the interaction betweem "him" and Naruto is totally amazing!!! Personally, I had always thought of their relationship being like that (no, not the sexual relationship, hentai, their "symbiosis" relationship... ^___~), and I think that that pairing is soooooo kewl!!! (And yes, that second part -is- refering to the sexual relationship, fyi...) I can't wait to find out what happens.......... Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
person akuma_river
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. So what happens now? Coolsa.
person azamaria-chan
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter! i've gotta say... i'm addicted xD wonder what's happened to sakura... O.o
person darkangel
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drool* oh, so hot. please, i want more.............reading ur fanfic is like............having an orgasm..............u just can't get enough of it. btw, tanx for ur indirect advice on...............the art of fellatio........................it's really helpful............and i've been taking notes. lol.
person hogo-chan
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaah! thanks for the update! that was soooo hot! but.... it was so cool! the ending with the broken bloody finger nails and voodoo doll thingy! the creepiness factor totally shot up through the roof with that one! i loved it! keep up the great work! and I understand with the whole erratic updating thing! s'okay! i just get over excited cuz i really like your fic! see ya next chapter!
person Washi
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooo... Droolworthy...
I love your interpretation of Kyuubi ^_^ Deliciously dark and twisted. Gah! Cliffhanger! I wanna find out exactly what happened to Sakura! -_-

Very tasty, and I'm curious and keen to see where you take this idea ^_^
person Juli
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, I'm so hot for that Kyuubi now. Hm, who would've guessed? :3 Is it creepy that I look forward to the Kyuubi/Naruto parts more than the SasuNaru ones? Methinks I need to go draw some Kyuubi/Naruto smexart. Immediately. Anyway, excellent work! I'm totally addicted to this fic. Ahhhh. :D
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wonder what kyuubi did. i'm sorry, but i don't like sakura much, but i won't wish her death. plus she seems better when she finds out that sasuke is not her but naru-chan^_^V


good job and please update soon
person tenohikari
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and the Kyubi mind fucks again - wheee I love it! the voodoo-doll thing is kind of freaky. naruto needs a sasuke doll he can torture.
person Ryu
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeee* XD oh I love this fic so much :p just the idea alone! brilliant! ^^V please write more soon~~ I'll be checking everyday *grin*

....iiiiiiiiiiiih XD XD *happy yaoi thoughts*