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yessah! w00t! this chapter was awesome! thank you for updating so fast! and dont worry about slow updating. the way you've been updating, i doubt it will really be that slow! omg! sasuke is totally falling into naruto's trap! *squeals* god i love you fic! see ya next chapter!

MMMmmm this fic definetly good written =^_^=

::drools:: looks like Kyubi's plan is working. Finally, Naruto gets to tell Sakura off and makes Sasuke jealous and horny.

Yay great chapter! I loved it! Oh and by the way, the two reviews from last time was one for each chapter. I felt such a great piece deserved to be reviewed after each update, or rather, for each update. I assume that when you have Naruto debating with himself while Sasuke is pinning him up that he is talking to the Kyuubi? Quite clever. I love how Naruto finally told team 7 what's what. That whole group pisses me off sometimes with their behavior. Especially Kakashi. Like I know, he's a pretty hot and awesome character but he gets on my nerves because he so plays the favorites and yeah, I hate that. I think that is what makes Naruto a likeable character, because everyone devaules him because he is a nobody really. I mean, everyone basically except like Sakura and Lee are from a ninja family/clan that has something special about them (and maybe Tenten, we never really find out about her). But Tenten is awesome with her weapons and gets credit for that and Lee for his determination and such and Sakura for her brains but Naruto gets nothing. I would so love me some Naruto because I feel that when he grows up he would so totally be hot. And that just goes to show you how much of a loser I am. But again, great chapter. I loved it. The insight into Sasuke's mind is awesome and is really beginning to build him as a character more than even the series is doing. Well, that's all for now, I can't wait until the next chapter!

Until Next Time...

Sfae

P.S. Oh, just in case someone hasn't told you, but I bet they have, the NaruSaru or SaruNaru (which I only found out recently) shows who is seme and who is uke (dominant and submissive), so the person who is listed first would be the seme/dominant figure and the one penetrating, and the second one is the submissive person who would be penetrated. If it's NaruSaruNaru (or change the names around some), it means the seme and uke changes within the fic and so each character plays both seme and uke at some point during the fic. Yeah, someone had to explain that one to me. (To tell you the truth, I just love the words Seme and Uke. I'm going to name my dogs--when I get them--Uke and Seme, just for kicks. I actually have this awesome picture on my desktop that is made to look like an ad for cologne that says Seme "dominance" and has a picture of Urahara from Bleach on it lookin' sexy and edible! Oh yeah! It's great.) Bye again!

Wow, excellent chapter. It seems Kyuubi and Naruto have started their plan. I thank you for the "blowing up" scene, I think sometimes we need to see something like that. Naruto is so sweet to everyone that he swallows all the hurt and just goes on. But he sometimes deserves to let the steam out and the scene was good. And wow, that scene was amazonig, SM at its best. You don't need tie someone down or to call him slave, just the right show of power play is good. And Naruto played his submissive part so well, I congratulate you on the whole set up, it was amazing and you can see how things will start to unravel. Will Naruto try to flirt with others to make Sasuke more insanely jealous. I know the evil in me wants to see a Kakahi seduction scene...hehehe, that would be fun. Regardless of that, your fic is awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Ohh, yes, "Wrapped Around Your Finger" is a perfect song for this fic. You can find the rest of the lyrics here: http://stingetc.com/lyrics/ go to W and click on the title.

*hugs*

that was so cool *starry wobbly eyed*

thank you!

wow. this is so good. oh i cant wait to read the next chapter. i love the way you've characterized your kyuubi. hopefullly the fox will be giving naruto s'more *coughs* "advice" on how to handle sasuke, that sexy bastard. keep up the good work!

Devious Lil Devil

Glad to know you enjoy my reviews. I try to make them fair and complementing since you go through such trouble to write an excellent story for others to enjoy. Really, I think it is important for people to tell others when they enjoy a story. Hence the reason I review.

This chapter was so well done. Again, I didn't catch maistakes, maybe for a few but they were very small. So small, I do not recall them. Once again, you left great details that really helped the reader get into the story and understand how it must have felt for both Naruto and Kyuubi. Now we know some what of how that silly fox works and how he likes to manipulate Naruto, and help him.

I think it was interesting how Kyuubi said he would feel everythign as if it were real, then Naruto awoke with that hard on and the scratch marks. Kinda creepy, but insightful. But that also means that he can hurt Naruto! But we all know he wouldn't because he needs him. Hopefully.

This is getting so interesting. Now Naruto is supposed to act like how Sasuke wants him to and at the same time they are trying to win over. It is so simple yet so ingenious! Something intersting is bound to come out of it!

I really hope you will update soon and I look foreward to reading all those wonderful words that you put your time and effort into, making them so good. It is a daily pleasure reading your work!

Emily

Gah! i love this chapter! thank god for Kyuubi. Now that mean old sasuke will get whats coming to him! *grumble grumble bastard grumble* thanks for updating so fast! keep up the good work!

WOW, now this is getting more interesting. Both Naruto and Sasuke are going to try to control eachother.
The spin that you put on the Kyubi is very interesting too. I like that he is trying to convince Naruto that he can control Sasuke.
Even though I still don't think that he gets it very much. o.o hehe Oh Sasuke, what are you going to do now. XD I can't wait
to see this updated!!!