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by mehmeh

schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eh heh heh, talking about the word 'ride'...

TenshiKaitou <---(A pervert too)

Yep, I totally agreed with ya about Sasuke. I'm like come on boy, how stubborn can u get? Get on with ur life would ya? lol

And oooo....Kyuubi's personal seduction lesson! That's hot! Too bad it didn't turn out to be more. (TK-chan wanna see more ahem ahem action).

UPDATE! SOON! VERY SOON!
person DarkSetoKaiba
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh.. Now *THIS* is more like it. The psycho-analysis I meant on both of them. It seems like, you're delving more into those untouched personalities that you see in the series/manga... But, at a different angle. Oh, I don't have my fictions up on here.. I get um.. embarassed, when others read my works no a-days.. they're not what they used to be when I first started off. some of my earlier fics are on fanfiction.net under my account: DarkHybridChild. But the majority of my fics are mostly on the Hybrid-Child user fourms.. (Hybrid-Child is an IRC network.. but it has much more then that). So, it's only those people who mainly read them.. I *do* however, email some of my works out to people.. Lately, my fics aren't exactly what they used to be, since I had writers block for the longest time, and after I got out of it, my whole writing style changed. So i'm currently trying to get back into my normal writing-self.

Seira: You *really* love to talk, don't you?

*glares* Who asked you? you're always on the fone with Laika-kun anyways.

Seira: ...

Anyways, This chapter was good. I like it. And the Kyuubi's analysis on human emotions and stuff, was really great. If i was in my right mind (before I had my writers block) I could've written something like that.... It seems my little sister has rubbed off on me (in humor-wise and cheesy-parody fictions, that is) Plus, the ones that I *would've* put here in AFF.net.. well, I don't think they were effecient enough to be put on here.. >.<; Anyways, I really do like this, and I can't wait for the next chapter now (I've gotten majorly interested now because of this Kyuubi-thing). Good luck with the next chapter.
person Vampia Zee
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t! More yay!

Sadly I actually yelled out 'w00t' when I saw you had anouther chapter up :P I love you :3

Anyways, this chapter was very interesting. I like the thought of Kyuubi getting Naruto to do his evil bidding. (that's sorta what it sounds like...after what he said a Demon did with it's shapshifting powers.) I also can't wait to see what Naruto will do to Sasuke. (like you know...strut around him showing leg *cackles*) Ah, ignore me! I just...really can't wait to see all the smutty things that are going to happen. *eyes twinkle* And I was wondering...is this going to stay SasuNaru or is it going to venture into narusasu as well? (you know the whole seme uke thing) Just curious! *big Naru-uke supporter*

*is shot in the face repeatedly*
person fuyuki
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is sooooooooooooooooo... yummy... i cant wait for the next part!!!
person rainbird
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa...who knew these stories could be so much fun...I need to know what Naruto does to Sasuke! Very good job too....keep it coming!! ^__^
person Scottishfae
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful! I love how you're disecting Sasuke into this perfectly pyschotic creature. You're the Dostoyevsky of Naruto Fanfiction! It's wonderful, really. I just can't put into words how brilliant all this is. I'm a bit surprised, however, that Kakashi didn't notice anything about Naruto's "change" or that he didn't say anything. It seems, to me at least, that Kakashi has the excellent ability to read everyone but then again, it probably fits better to not have him notice or say anything. Well I'll look forward to the next chapter, again.. Wonderful job.

Until Next Time...

Sfae
person Scottishfae
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was another excellent, excellent chapter. I absolutely adored Kyuubi, which is kinda strange saying, but I think you did an awesome job with his character and the development of him. I think the set up you've done for him is very clever and gives him a background that is absent from the real Naruto saga. I really can't wait for the next chapter! I'm looking for more appearances from Kyuubi! Again, great job, keep up the brilliant work!

Until Next Time...

Sfae
person Mavi
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kyaagh, I can't help leaking a few emotions just by reading this. The first chapter almost made me cry. I was at the edge of my seat on the second and now, I'm shuddering at the third. It's as though I can hear the Kyuubi's voice itself. You write great, well, at elast this fic is great. Keep it up, I'm sure I'll be in anticipation of the next chapters.
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Manipulation on BOTH ends of the leash?! *drumming fingers against each other* Eeeeexcellent. UPDATE SOON!!
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is too good and it's getting better. please update soon. plus, i know what kyuubi means. he's just saying get sasuke addicted to naruto so when he realize whats going on, it'd be too late. by that point, naruto would have sasuke wrapped around his finger and will be able to do whatever he wants with him. heck, naruto can make sasuke love him that way.


p.s. very good story;)