rate_review Reviews

Oh. My. God. You are a genius, A Fucking Genius.
This thing just had EVERYTHING I'd ever wanted from a smutty story. :P And so carefully put together as well, go you.

Ahaha, I was eating a piece of pineapple in school today (we just dissected it for further investigation, I study biology btw. XD) and it was so juicy.. And the fruitscene of this story popped into my head. XD Oh gods, pervy inside-joke. :D
It hardly ever happens that I actually wánt to re-read a story, but I think I'm gonna keep reading this 'till I can memorize it perfectly. :P

I hope you will decide to write more fanfiction in the future, you do an amazing job at it.
Much love from a freshly aquiered fan. (PS: I think I found this through dA, my username is dakduif there. I was just wondering if I know you there. :x)

All I can say is that you've come a long long way
since that first chapter, my dear!! Oh how you
never stop impressing me. You have a true talent
in writing. Maybe you should try and write for real,
and yes, I am being serious. And I'm honored to be
one of your favorite reviewers!

I've been waiting see Sasuke get what's been coming
to him and you delivered!God, that guy has gotten so
damn annoying in the manga! I hope Deidara puts a
hurting on him! Anyway, this chapter was a nice way
to end it, I think! Naruto finally comes to terms
with himself and Kyuubi and Sasuke gets fucked up
the ass like the bitch he is! And I simply loved the
part when Naruto threatens to rape Sasuke if he keeps
insulting him! SOOOO good! Theother thig was that you
have a good way of keeping your sex scenes fresh.
Like I said - you are very talented at writing! Also,
good job with the action and fighting! And the violence
of Naruto riooing everyone apart!

Too bad it's over. But all good things must come to
an end. Hope to see more from you in the future. Enjoy
your research with your boyfriend! O_o

This is your faithful reviewer Ryuukotsusei
signing out.

"Come on AmuseMe, take my hand, and I
will show you Neverland."

Hello Author,
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wow!!!! that was awesome! is there going to be a sequel?

your story - perhaps the most realistic take on sasuke and Naruto's...thing (not really a relationship - more like obsessive compulsive disorder on both their parts, and for different, inherently selfish reasons - though given the circumstances, that's quite a classic textbook case of anxious attachment on both their parts - guess they're so different they're alike; after all, the power of irony lies in its circular nature). Control is a very appropriate title. I really do believe that "love" is much too abstract a concept to not exit outside the tangible reality within human beings exist. I suppose, at the end of the day, it is really pragmatism and selfishness that rule us all. i mean something as idealistic as religion is the spawn of THE need to feel a certain degree of control over our lives, environment, forces of nature etc. the interesting thing, though, is that, perhaps, humanity resembles your naruto here - willing to pull the proverbial wool over eyes that see too clearly ,thus calling it 'love', when in fact it is something much more basic, something that they need, they want - a self gratifying possession of the most primitive kind.

you did well.

with the way this ended i totally have the urge to draw Konoha in flames with Naruto and Sasuke in the foreground, naruto all kyuubied out and looking happy and evil and Sasuke looking like he doesn't give a shit, with maybe a little smirk on his face... or black hair danging down from his hand like he's holding Itachi's severed head or something. >D

wah, this fic totally tickles my sadistic side. <3 <3 <3

YAY!!!!

*waves at you*

Sexy, evil Naruto at his finest. *heart* Gotta love him. ;D

Once again, I enjoyed your fic. :D It's the first evil Naruto fic I've read and it was awesome. 8D I do hope you write another one. *nudge nudge* XDDDD

Ack! I should go change your credit name in my A/N's. XD; *runs around frantically*

Wow ...so pleasantly dark! A perfect discription of how disgusting Konoha's society really is underneath! Not all amazing stories end with a sweet pie and I loved this one! Keep up the amazing writing and I'll look out for your next stories!

It's over...but I wanna see Konoha fall apart in the hands of the child beast they helped create!! That or Naruto's closest friends realizing the impending doom and with a heavy heart ends up brutally killing Evil!Naruto.

Then again you do have shortage of plot-bunnies so I guess it's understandable. Damn those plot-bunnies...why can't they breed as easily as regular bunnies!!

OH FOR FANFIC'S SAKE...MAKE A SEQUEL!!

That was...seriously one of the best fics I have read in a very long time. A very very long time. Like seriously...breathtaking. I don't think I can tell you just how good it was or what I liked about it. *shakes head* I read the original oneshot and thought it was good (altho I rarely review o^___^o) and read some of the story when you started out, so finding this again jogged a distant memory...and I'm glad it did. I can't do the whole story justice, but I'll name a few. The original, first chapter? Was so f***ed up and twisted and I loved it. Because I could understand it. The oh so complicated relationship and how you transfigured it into something worse and even more complex? God, I savored it like you managed to capture subtle flavors that I didn't know existed in my favorite and most familiar drink--because, oh wait, you did. Kyuubi? I loved the character you created. I could read his hidden and not-so-hidden agenda without you having to be trite or overly obvious. He was so developed, partly cuz of that, that he in itself is definately worth savoring. Just everyone was so fleshed out without you going into obnoxious detail...not too many people can do that. But the thing that really really puts the strawberry on the top (I really like strawberries!) was your final sinker. Those last few lines in all of this...I wasn't ready for an ending, but you made a viable one, and you made it stick. Those last few lines will DEFINATELY make it stick in my mind for the rest of my life. No joke, so congratulations, cuz most people waver at the end. Bravo.