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First off let me congratulate you for your fic. It's really quite good, and one of my new regulars, I await for what unfolds patiently. Moveing on I must say that I wouldn't call what you did with Kyuubi's character so much liberty but creative. I love it when authors put their own spins on things in the Cannon. When writing about them in the future especially it's very interesting to see what people come up with to fill the plot holes. I like your Kyuubi and I definitely like your characters. As far as Ooc goes, I think it's a given that the characters are ooc, i mean when in the cannon do you think Sasuke's going to even consider sleeping with Naruto or vice versa? Either way I think your potrayal of them isn't too far from what they'd probably be doing in those kinds of situations. I myself have written a fic where Gaara's nice, and Sasuke's happy, hey it's your story so you call the shots right. Anyway this has become long and preachy but I just had to shout out and give you the power for writing very powerfully, and definitely very well. Ciao.

Naaah, I love your interpretation of Kyuubi! This is a sexy fanfic, and it'll be even moreso if it doens't end happily. ^_^

--Ruby

^_^ good then I can count on reading some
funny 'eviiil' stuff for awhile ^-^
Continue on writing like this^^

Yes!

You do angst right. ^_^

*nods* I do understand your point about that. I used to do that a long time ago to calm my nerves and take stress out. but I also understand about the story reflecting yourself and when I read other stories like yours, they also reveal a persons self or personality in my opinion about how they feel or who they are..As far as the chapters has been, I've been really enjoying the story, and I can wait for the plans to unravel by Kyuubi sama but also Naruto I hope is going to get alittle better when he wants to be.. (btw,lol...you're right about Straight guys and yaoi..^^;; and I know what you mean about having to do that.)

Sorry I didn't review previously but I must admit to you I have been waiting with baited breath for chapter three and it didn't disappoint me. It was so good the way you portrayed the Kyuubi. It does play very well with the ancient belief of fox spirits being seducers and tricksters. My gleeful thought was "Sasuke won't know what hit him" and it totally made me insanely happy. While our Naruto is a little innocent and doesn't get the whole concept of what Kyuubi is telling him, I think he might actually follow some of the advice. Hehehe, I am evil, I know but I loved the thought of Kyuubi and Naruto getting the upper hand in this whole thing...as I said, poor Sasuke kun won't know what really happened.

You know that last stanza from The Police's "Wrapped around your Finger?" :
"Devil and the deep blue sea behind me
Vanish in the air you'll never find me
I will turn your face to alabaster
Then you'll find your servant is your master"

I can only think of it reading your fic. Excellent! Please continue!

Another awesome chapter - I love Kyubi! Yes, Naru-chan, you're eye candy, now go and give Sasuke cavities! mwaha! ^_^;; I'm also starting to believe NaruSasu just HAS to be a cannon couple for the fandom. I mean, they kiss in like episode 3! Yeah Sasuke needs to revive his clan, but isn't that why the writers gave Naruto the 'sexy no jitsu'? Or if Kyubi does manage to merge with Naruto (as the fic suggests they are) - he would be able to switch genders eventually??? Okay, maybe I just want to see what kind of insanely powerful offspring those two can produce.

This is the first time I'd ever be using this word to describe a Naruto fic, but, I think this was jut brilliant.

It's so smart, and well thought out. One thing about Naruto and Sasuke that many people tend to overlook is the fact the he really does need a girl to bring back the Uchiha Clan right? I'm glad you weaved that into the story so expertly.
Plus, SAsuke is extremely evil...in this fic. Although why is still blurry to me, I still anticipate the answer.

Great Job. Keep it Up.

oh, come on, you're so modest! (huggles you til you turned blue) ur fic is really good! the sadism of it just makes me wonder! as for this second chappie, i can't say but how twisted Sasuke is. Man, that guy seriously need a pyscharist! A doctor! A shrink! Whatever! Poor Naruto is in for a ride! Heh heh...

I loveeeeeeee this fic! I was looking for it under the title "Mistakes" and I couldn't find it. Then I noticed it under a new name! This is so very good! Keep it up (and keep dodging that rotten veggies!) O.o

Keep it up!

I'd love to see Sasuke take advantage of Naruto!