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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*eye twitches* .... *twitch twitch* .... *fingers twitch* .....
Senna: Uh-oh... this isn't going to be pretty...
*twitches again, eyes slowly narrowing, centimeter by centimeter* .....
Kairi: Quick! HIDE THE WEAPONS!
Josh: WHY!?
Kenny: BECAUSE SHE'S GOING TO EXPLODE DAMMIT! I PERSONALLY DO NOT WANT TO GET IN HER WAY!
Josh: ...Point taken!
Everyone: *rushes around trying to hide all the weapons*
.................*background heart monitor sound goes beeeeeeeeeep*
Senna: We're doomed.... *dives under the couch*
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT ALL ABOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTT!?! *glares muderously* SURE SASUKE IS INSANE AND NOT QUITE RIPE UP THERE! BUT THE ONE WHO WOULD ACTUALLY DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT WOULD BE ITACHI! OR OOUCHIMARU DAMMIT ...... *swings her flail around meanicingly* I don't mind angst, I don't mind rape, I don't mind torture, I don't mind alot of things.. BUT PSYCHO-ANALYSIS ON CHARACTERS AND TORTURE DO NOT BELONG TOGETHER! I would know, I have been writing fictions for many years!! *brandishes her Tsutana*
Kenny: *peeking out from under the carpet* I suggest you run... she's an expert at Kendo and is very deadly with that thing! Especially since her bf taught her...
AHHHHHHHHH *starts swinging sword madly, slashing blindly and seeing red* NONONONONONONONO DAMMIT NO! NOT RIGHT! NOT WRONG! JUST AHHHHHHH *flails madly*
Kairi: And she says Sasuke is Psycho? Tsh...
*sees author and eyes narrow* THAT'S IT NO MORE! *swings her sword*
Senna: Uh-oh... Everyone!
Josh: *trumpet sounds* CHARRRGGGEEEE!
Everyone: *tackles and dog-piles her*
*screams and flails madly* GET OFFA ME! I HAVE TO END THE MADDNESS! AIEEE!
Seira: Tsh.. Another author pissed her off?
Senna: *nods* Get over here and helkp us hold her down, she's gotten stronger, she must have been training
Seira: Ah.. Gotcha... *sits on DSK's back*
GET OF ME! NO DAMMIT I HAVE TO KILL.. MUST KILL... *glares muderously at everyone*
Josh: Where's DYM when we need her?
Kenny: in Texas, asleep stupid.
Josh: Oh... right! Anyways, let's get her out of here!
Everyone: *starts dragging a screaming DSK off*
*flails madly* Nooooo! ....this fic better get better if you continue it... NO MORE PSYCHOANALYSIS! *wails loudly as she's dragged out the door*
Senna: Uh-oh... this isn't going to be pretty...
*twitches again, eyes slowly narrowing, centimeter by centimeter* .....
Kairi: Quick! HIDE THE WEAPONS!
Josh: WHY!?
Kenny: BECAUSE SHE'S GOING TO EXPLODE DAMMIT! I PERSONALLY DO NOT WANT TO GET IN HER WAY!
Josh: ...Point taken!
Everyone: *rushes around trying to hide all the weapons*
.................*background heart monitor sound goes beeeeeeeeeep*
Senna: We're doomed.... *dives under the couch*
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT ALL ABOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTT!?! *glares muderously* SURE SASUKE IS INSANE AND NOT QUITE RIPE UP THERE! BUT THE ONE WHO WOULD ACTUALLY DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT WOULD BE ITACHI! OR OOUCHIMARU DAMMIT ...... *swings her flail around meanicingly* I don't mind angst, I don't mind rape, I don't mind torture, I don't mind alot of things.. BUT PSYCHO-ANALYSIS ON CHARACTERS AND TORTURE DO NOT BELONG TOGETHER! I would know, I have been writing fictions for many years!! *brandishes her Tsutana*
Kenny: *peeking out from under the carpet* I suggest you run... she's an expert at Kendo and is very deadly with that thing! Especially since her bf taught her...
AHHHHHHHHH *starts swinging sword madly, slashing blindly and seeing red* NONONONONONONONO DAMMIT NO! NOT RIGHT! NOT WRONG! JUST AHHHHHHH *flails madly*
Kairi: And she says Sasuke is Psycho? Tsh...
*sees author and eyes narrow* THAT'S IT NO MORE! *swings her sword*
Senna: Uh-oh... Everyone!
Josh: *trumpet sounds* CHARRRGGGEEEE!
Everyone: *tackles and dog-piles her*
*screams and flails madly* GET OFFA ME! I HAVE TO END THE MADDNESS! AIEEE!
Seira: Tsh.. Another author pissed her off?
Senna: *nods* Get over here and helkp us hold her down, she's gotten stronger, she must have been training
Seira: Ah.. Gotcha... *sits on DSK's back*
GET OF ME! NO DAMMIT I HAVE TO KILL.. MUST KILL... *glares muderously at everyone*
Josh: Where's DYM when we need her?
Kenny: in Texas, asleep stupid.
Josh: Oh... right! Anyways, let's get her out of here!
Everyone: *starts dragging a screaming DSK off*
*flails madly* Nooooo! ....this fic better get better if you continue it... NO MORE PSYCHOANALYSIS! *wails loudly as she's dragged out the door*
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You are going to make this a multi chapter story! I love you! ANd I can't believe you made it all up spur of the moment! That is real talent in it's self. I am thoroughly impressed! This chapter was nicely written just as the first was.
It was really great insight to get into Sasuke's head and know his postion on the whole matter. Those are the kinds of things that capture a readers attention and make the story interesting. By switching into Sasuke's POV, you are giving the reader insight as to what he is thinking and how he feels. Where as when you switch to maybe more of NAruto's thoughts, you are giving that same insight about him. It is a great way to keep people interested and not become bored with the story.
Oh, GOd, I'm so sorry! I just analyzed your writing like I had to for my English final today! Forgive me! That's almost exactly how we had to do it and I am stuck on that train of thought...along with Dimensional analysis, Planck's theory, Dalton's theory, Whether the Supreme Ct. can rule a law unconstitutional or not and other junk. FORGIVE ME!
But really, your story is excellent and very nice written I can't wait to read more so please update as soon as possible though I know you can't rush great things!
Adios!
EMILY!
It was really great insight to get into Sasuke's head and know his postion on the whole matter. Those are the kinds of things that capture a readers attention and make the story interesting. By switching into Sasuke's POV, you are giving the reader insight as to what he is thinking and how he feels. Where as when you switch to maybe more of NAruto's thoughts, you are giving that same insight about him. It is a great way to keep people interested and not become bored with the story.
Oh, GOd, I'm so sorry! I just analyzed your writing like I had to for my English final today! Forgive me! That's almost exactly how we had to do it and I am stuck on that train of thought...along with Dimensional analysis, Planck's theory, Dalton's theory, Whether the Supreme Ct. can rule a law unconstitutional or not and other junk. FORGIVE ME!
But really, your story is excellent and very nice written I can't wait to read more so please update as soon as possible though I know you can't rush great things!
Adios!
EMILY!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* big meanie-poo sasuke-pervert. lol. i actually dun mind naruto being submissive. i mean, he's a natural sub!!!! i love your story. please keep updating.
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. and tsk tsk, this is too sad for even an "i love you," "well, i hate you" fic. good story tho.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm...yay for a multi-chapter fic!~ *hearts*
you changed the name of the fic? o.O
Sasuke's inner self is pretty messed up *nods*
too bad i don't know about the other series you write fics for..oh wells, i can keep up with this fic instead! *heart*heart*
i liked the end scene of the chapter where Naruto came to their practice and how you described their spar as a dance that had been practiced and perfected. it was a great way to describe the events.
smoking sasuke is very cute. ^_^
thank you for writing!
you changed the name of the fic? o.O
Sasuke's inner self is pretty messed up *nods*
too bad i don't know about the other series you write fics for..oh wells, i can keep up with this fic instead! *heart*heart*
i liked the end scene of the chapter where Naruto came to their practice and how you described their spar as a dance that had been practiced and perfected. it was a great way to describe the events.
smoking sasuke is very cute. ^_^
thank you for writing!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! i got my wish!
hmm some how i imagained naruto running away or killing himself. but that would have been way to predictable. glad you didn't just jump into that righ out the gate. looks like its gonna be good! oh please update again sooN!
hmm some how i imagained naruto running away or killing himself. but that would have been way to predictable. glad you didn't just jump into that righ out the gate. looks like its gonna be good! oh please update again sooN!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!! is this a one-shot?! it looks like a one-shot! even if it is a one-shot, can you please CONTINUE it! onegai! it is so rare to see such sadistic fics! i thoroughly enjoyed it! too much in fact! i want it to continue! please please please...it really has the potential to continue. oh crap, i'm raving mad again? darn, that means your fic is really good. too good, it makes me to be ashamed of my own pathetic writings. waaaaai.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY multi chaptered... *does a happy dance'
ohhh just gotta love this twisted psycothic
way of Sasuke... I can't write stuff like that
cause I would feel guilty... Then I just have to
read more from you YAY more more...
I probably scared you of now but I will wait
patiently till you shov up writing more ^_^
ohhh just gotta love this twisted psycothic
way of Sasuke... I can't write stuff like that
cause I would feel guilty... Then I just have to
read more from you YAY more more...
I probably scared you of now but I will wait
patiently till you shov up writing more ^_^
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uh.... damn. I had a review all writen out..but I'm not use to the stupid school mac that I deleted it ;___;
Let me try and re-write it ...
I feel really bad about not reviewing for this fic back when you first put it up (and nobody had reviewed it yet...i could have been the first person to review ;__;) And I'm very, very, very happy that you decided to continue it! In the first chapter, like on of your other reviewed (who I am too lazy to find the name of), I thought Sasuke was going to mouth rape Naruto. But what you did instead was very hot too. o__o (maybe you awakened the more sadistic me? Or..whatever you call it :D) I keep thinking that Sasuke is just going to throw Naruto on the floor, and have his way with him....hmm...
I look forward to more! Thank you for the very hot fic :3
Let me try and re-write it ...
I feel really bad about not reviewing for this fic back when you first put it up (and nobody had reviewed it yet...i could have been the first person to review ;__;) And I'm very, very, very happy that you decided to continue it! In the first chapter, like on of your other reviewed (who I am too lazy to find the name of), I thought Sasuke was going to mouth rape Naruto. But what you did instead was very hot too. o__o (maybe you awakened the more sadistic me? Or..whatever you call it :D) I keep thinking that Sasuke is just going to throw Naruto on the floor, and have his way with him....hmm...
I look forward to more! Thank you for the very hot fic :3
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee - now its Sasuke's turn to angst! ... or maybe not; still it's nice to know he feels a liiitttle guilty - but now plans on playing mind games? Oooh I hope Kyubi kicks his ass.