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>> Sasuke is such a jerk! God I really should kill you for making our Naru-chan suffer so much ;__; I hope Naruto decides to kill Sasuke and then burn his dead body and feed it to Sakura >> Anyway, update soon ^__^ I am loving this fic even though it pains me to read it ^^;

Lol, alright. Though the second chapter is pretty good. The one that surprised me though is how Sasuke actually started smoking but still I really do feel sorry for Naruto and I can't wait til Kyuubi will make an appearance. I hope he'll put Sasuke in his place...maybe?

Vicious.

Pleeeeeese don't make this a one-shot! It could be soooo terribly, wonderfully angsty I can hardly stand it!!! *pout* Pleasepleasepleaseplease??

That was creepily entertaining... Very interesting though - a refreshing break all the poorly written WAFF-y sasunaru. Another chapter or two would be nice... *coughhinthintcough*

I know, I should probably be thinking something along the lines of, 'like, _OMG_ that was _SOO_ terrible, how could you do that to my poor Naru-chan!!' but really... my only thought after reading that was, 'Shit, that was hot.' o.o; I guess I'm just sick and twisted like that. *shrug* Oh, wait. Yeah. There was a second thought. 'SEQUEL!!! ;-;' I guess this could pass off as a good one-shot, but I would really love it if you could continue this story. I would like to see more from Sasuke's point of view, what he's thinking, and his reaction to how Naruto acted after he tormented him. You seem to get very small glimpses into what he's thinking, but I would like to see a chapter more from his perspective. That would be very interesting. And of course, the idealist in me wants Sasuke to realize that he also feels something for Naruto, emotionally or physically - preferably both - but I have no idea whether you would even consider something like that, considering how dark and angsty this story is. I'm actually much more of a fluffy-romance person. I don't often get into the dark, angsty fics. But sometimes I do. Like this one, obviously, I like. But I think the perfect story contains both. A story that is entirely fluff can be cute, but can get boring really fast. Angst can also become rather dull after a while, and it has the additional downside of being depressing. I don't like depressing things. They make me feel... depressed. o.o; (Imagine that.) But in a story that has it both, it's more like a roller-coaster type thing. One minute, you're like, 'Oh, they're so cute and happy and it's just SO sweet-', and then BAM. You're hit with something really dark and angsty and the result is, 'O.O; .... OMG. .... ;-;' Well, that's how it kind of is for me, anyway. ^-^; So, if you do decide to continue (which I really hope you do!), I would like it if you could consider lightening it up just a bit. But of course, whatever you would like to do is perfectly fine! Even if you decide to just leave it as is. I don't want to come across as being really pushy. I'm really just appreciative of authors like you that share their written fanworks... how else would I get my sasunaru fix? :p ..... *notices how long review has become* I really can't believe I just wrote this much. I'm so sorry. ^^; (I have a tendency to ramble... obviously.)

Aww, poor Naruto kun! The story though is really good and I can't wait to read another chapter of it. I just hope that Sasuke will drop the bastard act later on otherwise Naruto will do something he might regret.Just an opinion but I really love this story.

Woh, that was heavy. Some much to think about and explore. This deserves a sequel. I really wonder what was going through Sasuke's head through this especially at the end before he disapeared.

..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................WOW! That is some very powerful writing there and I must say I am almost speechless. that story was so well written, I can't believe it! The emotions and the actions as well as the feelings of the characters is so real, it stuns me. They are so in depth and well thought out. And the way Sasuke acted to Naruto after he told him, it was so real. I just can't believe how great this is. You must consider writing more to this. I want to know what happens to Naruto now that he has been left crying and what caused Sasuke to go a little unstable and do that to Naruto. It is just so marvelous. I hope you will write more.

Excellent work and keep it up!
Emily

weird and twisted, but twisted in a way that was hot.

I honestly liked Sasuke like this...*bangs head on table* i am so messed up. I do feel sorry for Naru-chan (let's just pretend that Sasuke was fantasizing about you when he was doing his self loving). The story really portrays this sense of craziness in Naruto for being a demon and in Sasuke for doing the sick things that he did to Naruto.

When i started to read this fic, I never expected Sasuke's reaction to Naruto's confession to be something like this...it was a surprise and welcomed one. *nods* Loved the part where Sasuke tied Naruto with the wires (I thought that was very Sasuke-like). Hm...i was expecting Sasuke to mouth-rape (?) Naruto...oh wells. ^_^ things were still cool.

wow, i'm really all over the place in this review (sorry).

anyways, i really like the fic and hope it develops into a longer story. I'd be really neat to see how Naruto copes with Sasuke's reaction. And if Sasuke 'enjoyed' it enough that he'll repeat the same thing again (that's be really nice).

damn..this was really good, i want more. *laughs* do you have another other pieces of writing like this one?

yes, yes, please tell me if you ever decide to continue this!