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by mehmeh

person narlover
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING! Naruto's had such a sad life and you had to do that to him. You better update this story or i swear i'll make sure no one reads any of you stories. EVER AGAIN!

- you can email me if u have any questions on why i hate ur stories
person tenohikari
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, This story got me a tear jerk out of me ::covers face:: but it's wonderfully written and chocked full of angsty goodness - which is refeshing than being suffocated by fluff all the time. Please continue!
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no...not a one shot....o.o...please. it was way too good to be anything but that.
person jadetiger
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh very sad, hope there is more!
person Ezj
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O...


But damn was that good or what... O_O
I should think it's horryifying to poor
Naruto but damn it was good...
Even if the ending were great some
where deep down I will be hoping for
an extra chapter even if it were a great
ending... =^_^=
person Scottishfae
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so in tears at the ending of this. It's so sad! But, even though you said you did it to take up time and you didn't like it that much, you should so continue it. I would love to read more on how Naruto changes more because of this. I think you did a very good job of capturing both characters' emotions here and though yes its very angsty, and I would love to kick some Sasuke ass after that, you could expand this to make a very interesting story (w/ an ending of angst or happyness). I do hope you think of continuing this story. If not, that's okay. It was a brilliant story!

Until Next Time,

Sfae