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for Control

by mehmeh

person akiravadel
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No keep going! I actually started reading this back when you only had the first 4 chapters. I finally found it again!! Yay! Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please don't kill Sasuke >.< I'll be very very sad!

Thanks~
Keep up the great work!
~Akira~
person Hitokiri_X_Shinobi
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD that is such a wonderful story!!! I wish i could right like you, but sadly I can't T.T Is there any more tothis or was that indeed the end chapter?
person beeku
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh sooo good i just refound this story recently.
please update soon...although i'm more sasunaru then narusasu.. this is fine too.
person scarecrowqueen
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omFUCKINGg! I seriously had the female equivalent of a hard on the entire time I read this. Was that the end or is there more to come?
person innerchild
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn... that was some sick, twisted, sexy, unbeleiveable... fuck, i don't know. it was just so damn good, that i'm all tongue tied and sound like an idiot. but, that's all right. cause all i need to say is

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Psylocke
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.......!! (yup that's all i can say at the moment, lol)

i love this fic so much... Sad to see that your love for Naruto is going down-hill thanks to the fillers (i've stopped watching them, here's hoping that Part 2 will begin around 210). but man....this fic... The NaruSasu in this chapter was so....wow..

lol sorry for my bad review, but it really has left me speachless! XD
here's hoping for more NaruSasu before you end the fic. :)

(and what's the deal with people acting like idiots when it comes to Seme!Naruto anyway?? gah, so annoying!)
person Ryuukotsusei
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its ME! I'm BAAACK! Did you miss me? No
need to worry though - I'd never give up on
this fic. NEVER! Anyway...

I simply love the way you did your latest
chapters, from Sasuke fucking Naruto to
learning about Kyuubi to Naruto semi-raping
Sasuke! So much dark, evilness! I couldn't
believe that Naruto actually gave into his
demon. But, as you said, that bitch Sasuke
deserved it.

Your skills for description are so...perfect!
Sasuke's blowjob was very...tasty. Then I loved
the way he tried to hurt Naruto when he fucked
him but Naruto wouldn't show any pain. Not to
mention the semi-rape chapter. Naruto made some
very good points about Itachi to that idiot-loser.
He just doesn't think! ARGGGGH! At least he got
what was coming to him. Really, really hot chapters.

I agree with you so much: I want those damn fillers
to end! GOD! At least the Bleach fillers are good,
but Naruto fillers suck! At least the manga is getting
good. On, and on a side note, why did you delete your
other story, "Pet"? I know you said that you might stop
writing on Naruto, but that fic seemed so promising. Oh
well, great job.

Later
person kaesaku
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa~
..loves ur story!
took me more than 2 hours to read it! hehe.. ;p

i wanted to review every chapter,
but unfortunately, my head hurts,
so i kinda rush-read it..
..still loves it though~

hmm..
wonder why more people prefer the sasunaru thingy..
not that i have anything against it..
gad, i love it!
but im more of a narusasu fan..
y'know a boy with that demon inside can never be an uke..
hahaha~
and oh, did i mention he was trained by the perverted duo?
kkkk.. ;p

so, anyway, my point is..
i love ur story, i hope you continue it..
..and i love this chapter~
t'was hot.

..for more hotness to come~
*cheers*
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was truely amazing. Good work.
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! u updated! ty!ty!ty!ty!TY! woot!