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for Control

by mehmeh

person Anon
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who needs a beta when you write as well as that! This chapter just blew me away in every sense, the description was superb and how the entire scene was played out was fantastic.

I get the feeling that naruto may be getting another visit from the kyuubi soon...
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG.....YOU'RE ALIVE!!! *glomps you* what's up? how ya been? yeah, fillers suck ass. but the one that had ino, naruto and shino on a mission together was pretty funny. ((((SPOILER))))) seeing shino laugh was freaky as hell. you have no idea how bad this fic was haunting me especially after that evil cliffie you left us with. and then to come back with such a beautiful chapter. *glomps again* but what do you mean you're ending this soon? *starts to tear up* but i love this story.....*shrugs* oh well, do what you gotta do. *smiles*

i just adore naursasu. i wonder if sasuke was paying any attention to what naruto was saying. i know i wouldn't have if naruto was banging me but sasuke's a frickin' uchiha so he should have caught some of it, at least. i sure hope that 'talk' of theirs took sasuke's friggin' ego down a notch or 3. did i mention how awesome the chapter was? ^__^ i loved the way kyuubi thanked sasuke after naruto was done with his ass. that sexy beast. and the way naruto was using itachi to control sasuke! *drools* gods, i love that way he and kyuubi thinks. there should so be a threesome between naruto,kyuubi and sasuke. *kage bunshin no jutsu would be very useful for that* i'm sure sasuke would enjoy that little session very much *evil grin* thank you so much for *ahem* cumming back to us. it was well worth the wait. looking foward to your next update whenever that may be. *quickly molests kyuubi-san then runs away*

~Devious Lil Devil
person Sas-uke
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah... you know, I was surprised to see this fiction continued. A pleasant surprise, all the same. So rare to find one that isn't so... disgustingly warm-hearted and sappy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What took you so long?! Evil!Naruto has so been worth it...THANK YOU FOR BEING DEAD!
person Hitomi No Ryu (again!)
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^I meant 'NOT BEING DEAD!'

Sorry for the stupid typo!! ^^;;;
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do not tell me you have forgotten about this! We wanna know what happens next! but this looks fantastic so far.
person Evol
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHY! WHY WONT U UPDATE!? WHY!?!
geez, youd think with all the reviews u get you'd be quicker to update. what, dont you love us anymore!?
person kyouteki
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe I've read this like a million times! But I still lvoe it!! I can't wait for him to show the world and sasuke how much of a demon he is!
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i fucking love this fucking story so fucking much! i usually dont swear this much but thats how much i fucking love it!
person Wing
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...O.O!!

I love your fic--it's like one of its kind; it's awesome. And you've made Kyuubi part of the story! ^^; Buuuut...

Your major-cliffie has made me mad.

Wait... if I kill the author, the major-cliffie desease will not be cured. D: You'd better update or I'll make history repeat...!