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by mehmeh

person Allison
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omgee! >w<

If you don't update soon, I'll probably spaz and fall dead, foaming from the mouth! D:

;_;

(Anyways, besides that...great story! Slightly shorter then your other chapters though, but hey. :/ that's okay)

Update soon! :D

-Allison
person Omena
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, no..I shouldn't be reading this, it's just too sad for me ;P But I doubt that Sasuke and Naruto relationship would be all sunshine and flowers but Sasuke's being an real ass here! *sniff* gaah, Naruto, get over him and find soméone better! (please ;P)
OH goody, I think Kyuubi won't be letting Sasuke off the hook too easily :D
I really liked those conversations between Naruto and Kyuubi ^___^ I could actually imagine Kyuubi giving Naruto "good" advices in love life in the manga too ;P *mwah*
sorry, can't think of anything good to say at the moment.. ^^
person Nissie
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I didn't notice you updated twice! Thanks so much! I thought you weren't going to continue this story, so you just made my day ^____^ Chapter 10 was really hot (hehe, sometimes it reminded me of Sensitive Pornograph, only hotter! <--biiiig compliment, 'cause I love SP ^^) And now I'm worried about Sasuke, even though he's been such an incredible asshole through your entire fic. You great writer you. *sigh* I guess I'm going to have to wait for an update >_< I suck at waiting... But knowing there'll more makes me happy ^^

Have a great day/week/month (I hope it's not going to be a year before you update ^^; but in case it is, have a great year!)

Nissie
person Sophade
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wowowowow!! XD what will happen??

He scared me with those last words! XD

well anyway, I like your fanfic, even if I don't like the beginning, but, I want to know : Tell me! There will be a happy ending, okay?? I don't want ALL that to finishing badly! XD (sorry my english isn't that good)

so, please tell me, if my precious Naruto will be loved in return or if Sasuke will be a fucking-bastard and hate him because of this stupid Kyuubi! (sorry, I hate him in your story! XD)

well, tell me! ^^

Sayounara! ^^
person Ghonchi (2 lazy 2 sign in)
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaaah! Marry me! or let Kyuubi have my children! I love him!

Really hot story this one, i can clearly see the scenes infront of me *drools*

*Waiting for another update with twiching hands, much like a (drug) addict O_o*
person claire
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!!! This is really good! Well done, i'll say that this is one of the better NAruto fics i've read.
person Uchiha Serina
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! Sasuke is really an ass! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next. Such an evil stopping point!
person liankitty
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a cool ending sentence, it almost makes the fact that this is another cliffhanger worth it.
I definately enjoy this fic, I'm usually not attracted to the dark fics but this has more to it than that and really, I'm just wondering how far Naruto will go and how long Sasuke can hold out.
person macy
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
honyoo~~~ i have no idea where this will lead to, but no matter, i can't wait to see what happens next! the lemon in chapter 10 was super duper unbelievably hot by the way.
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! Evil cliffie! Must. have. my. monthly. dose. of. kyuubi-san. Lol. Yes, girlie. (Sorry, if I'm wrong) You deserve all that praise and more. *try to butter you up some more in hopes of getting faster updates* but seriously, I so want naruto (or kyuubi) to , so, tear sasuke a new one for that f-ing comment! The nerve of that revenge-seeking-bastard. *is very protective of her naru-chan* anyway, nice preview. You got my attention. (When did you ever lose it?) so until next time, ja. *steals a french kiss from kyuubi-san then locks herself away in the safety of her room*

°Devious Lil Devil