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for Control

by mehmeh

person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear...this is not going to end well.

UPDATE SOON!
person hyperkaoru
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Yes! Yessss! I'd thought that you'll not continue it but when I saw this chapter. OMG... Just OMG.
person fyredevyl
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! FINALLY!! I was seriously starting to wonder if you were still alive. I'm glad you are!
This chapter was great. Sasuke's slowly being pulled in. HAHAHAHA....he's such a prick.
Ooooohhhh, and is Kyuubi trying to break away from Naruto? Yet another prick!
I hope Naruto will be ok.
Please update at least every 6 months. It's torture to keep us waiting so long! ^_^
person beeku
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GASP WHAT WILL HAPPEN!?
nice sex XD
BAD cliffy...
person TenshiKaitou
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah, you update! nice ahem lemon...(blush) but i still don't quite get what's Naruto trying to do, or is he too far gone in the head? ah...
person tenohikari
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhhhhh cliff hanger!!! I should have been expecting that. Anyway, I understand that you have a life so take your time with the next chapter.
person Jane_lane
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn every chapter is a fucking explosion. Keep writin or i'll go ninja on your punk ass!
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, this is your new loyal fan. I just read your wonderful story and would like to say both that this is the best work with a Kyubi/Naruto pairing that I have read and... *pokes repeatedly* Why haven't you updated?! (Not to sound pushy or anything, but it's been 8 months...)
person Some Crazy Pyro
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, and the point goes to the fox-boy! The crowd goes wild! Panties and Bras litter the floor and OMG! woo we have boxers! Lol, please update soon, my brain is getting ready to explode all over the inside of my head.
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool* luffajoo and your crazy yaoi writing :3