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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOOD I LOVE IT I WANNA SEE ANOTHER CHAPIEE PLZZZZZZZ
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to start this review by yelling about how great and wonderful this story is. But after reading both chapters it seems like that would be offending. Though I absolutly LOVE this fic. And I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Keep up the good work and PLEASE O PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good, very angsty!
Very appropriate cos I was feeling all down like that all day (tho not to so much of a degree)
I like the author comment at the end...
In an odd sort of way this is a very cute fic! ^_^
And I hope that the past expirences u mention at the first are behind you! *warm and fuzzy bear hug*
I had a friend that cut herself, but thankfully she stopped before she got to the stage of cutting a vien, she was still at skin when she finally got happy again...
I really like this fic, update soon please!
~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
Very appropriate cos I was feeling all down like that all day (tho not to so much of a degree)
I like the author comment at the end...
In an odd sort of way this is a very cute fic! ^_^
And I hope that the past expirences u mention at the first are behind you! *warm and fuzzy bear hug*
I had a friend that cut herself, but thankfully she stopped before she got to the stage of cutting a vien, she was still at skin when she finally got happy again...
I really like this fic, update soon please!
~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Konnichiwa!
Wow! I'm on a role today! I read almost three enjoyable fics ...yes, I'm picky. Get over it =D.
Anyway, I did like the plot to this story, and I liked how you expressed the emotions and such through-out the whole thing. I must say, I enjoy sadder stories a great deal more than happy ones, just because I've been through a lot of things. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying my life is a living hell, but it isn't heaven on earth either. This fic isn't too sad for me -yes, a hardened heart can take a lot I suppose- it is a mixture of sadness and happiness, which I can appreciate if an author can combine both these things.
Now for the dreaded part: mistakes. You know, it's funny. I don't think I've ever read a story on this site that had no mistakes in it. Well, anyway, you should consider an editor for this fic, or at least read over it a few times. There are multiple spelling, grammar, puncuation, and paragraping mistakes in this fic. I would be happy to edit this for you, if you don't mind. You don't have to let me or anything, and I'm sorry if you consider this insulting, because I do not mean it that way although I have to remember that people tend to be more sensitive than I am.
Also, one more thing: don't apologize for what you've written. Sorry, that just pisses me off sometimes. When you write something, you write it because you like how it sounds. We read it because we like what you've written (or possible don't), so I see no need to apologize. If someone says they don't like what you've written, then just laugh it off because it's their fault for reading it (because they could have stopped), and there are many other fics to read, so they don't have to sit there and complain.
Well, I suppose this sums it up for me. Watch out, this scary girl may try to find a way to contact you. -Be afraid. Be VERY afraid- ...I was just kidding. Hey..what are you doing with... Oh no! Wait, wai...
STAY TUNED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO FISHYPERSONGIRLTHINGYMABOB!
-Youkai Dreams
Wow! I'm on a role today! I read almost three enjoyable fics ...yes, I'm picky. Get over it =D.
Anyway, I did like the plot to this story, and I liked how you expressed the emotions and such through-out the whole thing. I must say, I enjoy sadder stories a great deal more than happy ones, just because I've been through a lot of things. Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying my life is a living hell, but it isn't heaven on earth either. This fic isn't too sad for me -yes, a hardened heart can take a lot I suppose- it is a mixture of sadness and happiness, which I can appreciate if an author can combine both these things.
Now for the dreaded part: mistakes. You know, it's funny. I don't think I've ever read a story on this site that had no mistakes in it. Well, anyway, you should consider an editor for this fic, or at least read over it a few times. There are multiple spelling, grammar, puncuation, and paragraping mistakes in this fic. I would be happy to edit this for you, if you don't mind. You don't have to let me or anything, and I'm sorry if you consider this insulting, because I do not mean it that way although I have to remember that people tend to be more sensitive than I am.
Also, one more thing: don't apologize for what you've written. Sorry, that just pisses me off sometimes. When you write something, you write it because you like how it sounds. We read it because we like what you've written (or possible don't), so I see no need to apologize. If someone says they don't like what you've written, then just laugh it off because it's their fault for reading it (because they could have stopped), and there are many other fics to read, so they don't have to sit there and complain.
Well, I suppose this sums it up for me. Watch out, this scary girl may try to find a way to contact you. -Be afraid. Be VERY afraid- ...I was just kidding. Hey..what are you doing with... Oh no! Wait, wai...
STAY TUNED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO FISHYPERSONGIRLTHINGYMABOB!
-Youkai Dreams
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ur fanfict was cool...a bit wierd but really good. only problem is there is no problem with cutting urself. i use to do it and i don't regret it at all.
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your a awsome writer so please update soon ^.^
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON! And umm...think
about finding a beta...There's some
mispelled words in there and I'm
uber grammar/punctuation/spelling
police >.< sorry! You rawk! And so
does this angsty story! Email me if
you'd like to talk about the beta thing.
I tend to take a bit of a while editing
people's writing, but I DO get it done.
Just a suggestion ^_^. Keep up the
super writing!
about finding a beta...There's some
mispelled words in there and I'm
uber grammar/punctuation/spelling
police >.< sorry! You rawk! And so
does this angsty story! Email me if
you'd like to talk about the beta thing.
I tend to take a bit of a while editing
people's writing, but I DO get it done.
Just a suggestion ^_^. Keep up the
super writing!
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE DAMMIT! Okay I really liked it and you must update or all hell will break-loose!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weee a really good chapter ther^^
It's getting really interesting so
I'll be waiting for the next chap =^_^=
It's getting really interesting so
I'll be waiting for the next chap =^_^=
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should double check your chapters a bit more. You've confused "your" and "you're". ;)