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for Scars of Pain

by KinkyMonkey

person Emina- (too lazy to sign in)
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, really.
I tried reveiwing the chapter before, chapter one, but I never got around to do it.
I like the way this fic is picking up, the emotions, the drama, it's nice ^^
Yeah, I can kinda relate to what you said at the very end of the fic, cutting is the worst thing you can get into. And I should know.

Poor Sasuke, I hope you keep him cheerful the rest of the fic ^^

Keep up with the good work ^^

-E.m.i.n.a
person Saki
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying Sasuke and Naruto's POV including what Sasuke had done to himself but how Naruto really cares for him.Please update this soon! I can't wait for the next chapter,though I feel like those two became closer after Sasuke talked it out with Naru kun.
person kagaya
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. It almost seemed like a finished fic until I reached the last line, because otherwise it would have been interesting if Naruto thought maybe Sasuke was trying to say he liked him when Sasuke was really just trying to tell his most trusted /friend/ that he needed help. All in all, ganbatte yo!
person JiyuHatellKodai
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One, I'm okay with Iruka being dead, as long as it was a good cause. Two, Sasuke seems like a cutter to me, so I wasn't all that surprised.

Three, GAH THIS STORY IS SO EMOTIONAL!! *Goes to squeal and cry on her bed.*
person Liliath
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why not? cutting yourself is quite nice, you just dont know coz you never tried XP but really good chapter, a bit...I mean really anghsty and drama...but still good ^^
person hogo-chan
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! omg! i love you! iloveyousofsckingmuch!!!!!!! >_< this chapter was amazing! and you updated so fast! i loved it! normally in fics like this, its naruto that cuts and sasuke that tries to help him out! it makes poor naru-chan seen like i total... well... i gues it makes him seem like sasuke's bitch. *grins sheepishly* anyway, thank you so much for updating! please keep up the super work! (*giggles* i can't believe i just wrote that, 'super work' lol) and fast updating too!
person jadetiger
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can't stand the sight of others blood, what makes you think i can stand the sight of my own? no worries there.

interesting fic though, usually its the other way around with naruto cuttinghimself... hmm i hope naruto spends a few nights at sasukes to keep an eye on him, "cough" cough" ;P
person Yami Jay
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I was really sad for sasuke now. He suffured enough.
person Alie
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this story is going, some deep dark secret that Sasuke has, although I hope I know what's bothering him ^^ Please continue this story, I think you kept the characters true to their nature and I can't wait to read some more!
person Rachel Dracon
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, interesting. Sad that Iruka's dead, and wow, Sasuke's acting funny, hope Naruto hears him out soon. Updaaaaate!