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May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very beautiful chapter. You've expressed love through a lot of detail, and the sex was detailed also. You did a very good job. I hope I see more stuff from you.
NaruSaku Pairing rules.
NaruSaku Pairing rules.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story. It's so sweet =] but you guys spelled "Ikitakimasu" wrong...haha
excellent story though, Naruto is so cute! ^^
excellent story though, Naruto is so cute! ^^
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC!!!
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. Loving and tender, but very erotic all at the same time. It's hard to find good NaruSaku fics anywhere, let alone lemons, so I thank you very very much for writing this wonderful piece of fiction!
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Very nice fic. Loved the fluff... and I rarely do with m/f. Good job
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEST NARUTO/SAKURA LEMON EVER! I love this couple to death.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
having read all of the Naruto Manga(well, up to whats available on narutofan.com anyway) and having seen all 119 episodes of the series released, I have to say that this is the most genuinely sweet and well done fanfic I've read about the series, hell, that I've ever read. It was quitre refreshing that there was such a nice relationship, the characters really felt like themselves. Kudos on a job astoundingly well done.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an absolutely fabulous piece of writing.
It was very sensual--so descriptive you could smell it.
I was so very impressed. I'm a little new to this style of writing (laughs at self) and I would definetly use this piece as a guide or even inspiration.
Hurrah!
It was very sensual--so descriptive you could smell it.
I was so very impressed. I'm a little new to this style of writing (laughs at self) and I would definetly use this piece as a guide or even inspiration.
Hurrah!
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liked the story. ^_^
NaruSaku is my favourite pairing, and I was so pleased to hear that there was a new het AND NaruSaku lemon fic! The guys at "Heaven & Earth" (a NaruSaku board/site - yes, NaruSaku sites DO exist. :P) have been enjoying it! It is well written, and I was glad to see a fic that not only frames the lemon scene in a proper story, but also does so much more than "They French kissed, threw their clothes off and shagged missionary. The end." Great scenes!
I'm hoping to write a multichapter lemon fic soon, if it is as good as yours I will be pleased. ^_^
NaruSaku is my favourite pairing, and I was so pleased to hear that there was a new het AND NaruSaku lemon fic! The guys at "Heaven & Earth" (a NaruSaku board/site - yes, NaruSaku sites DO exist. :P) have been enjoying it! It is well written, and I was glad to see a fic that not only frames the lemon scene in a proper story, but also does so much more than "They French kissed, threw their clothes off and shagged missionary. The end." Great scenes!
I'm hoping to write a multichapter lemon fic soon, if it is as good as yours I will be pleased. ^_^
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite impressive. Very few mistakes and only minor ones as far as grammar and spelling. The style of the piece was great. There were times when it did feel like an rp session but that didn't really detract from it. The sex was beautifully written and very erotic. Best of all, you did my favorite pairing. I want to see more like this from you two.