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for Konoha Garden

by etacarinae

person Teaspoon
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha, I love this fic. I really do.
Your writing is really great, and it's a very cute idea.
I hope to see the next chapter soon (ah, the tension! Will Sasuke walk in on Naruto and Gaara? I can't wait.) - please, please keep it up. ^____^
person Setsu
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow cool! Thats so sweet of Sasuke to get Naruto food! Is Sasuke going to walk in on Naruto and get the wrong idea? Or go off on Gaara? Will Gaara try anything...and if he does I'd love to see how it plays out. I can just see Naruto nervous trying to give Gaara a massage (drools) heh. Will Gaara like Naruto so much that he'll try to buy him like Sasuke tried to do? Will Gaara and Naruto get to know each other and eventually become friends? Whats the old hag..er I mean Tsunade(sp?) going to do when she finds out 'another' guy takes interest in Naruto? OH And before in the earlier chapters when Naruto was dressed and a girl(snickers) you said he looked like his mom right? and that he had left the room some people in the building saw him dressed up, did any one see him and take an interest? And is there going to be any scenes where Naruto is out side and runs into any of these people? Is Naruto just living their and helping Tsunade? This story is awesome I love it! You write so well and I just get sucked into the story with Gaara showing up this should be interesting, will Sasuke have a rival for Naruto? And does Naruto know and fighting moves, like defence? Or is he gona learn any?
person Blood
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O nooo! you MUST continuueeee! X_X PLEAAAASSEEE!!!!! And holy crap! T_T that was such a good chapter. Oh, btw, is the issue of Kyuubi excluded from your fic? And Itachi? And..*shudder* Orochimaru?
person Shiko
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooo this should be good! Is Sasuke goung to have compotistion for Naruto with Gaara? Will Gaara try to buy Naruto like Sasuke did? What about that "He smells nice" bit...did Gaara smell Naruto on Sasuke? and if so will Gaara notice the smell of Naruto and put 2 and 2 together? ^.^ Heh I so wana see the scene between Gaara a Naruto! Please Update soon I am really getting into this story and enjoying it. Thous a lil more action would be cool. ^_^' not not that kinda action you hentai! I ment fight scenes is Naruto going to fight?...though more a that kinda 'action' is good to (Naruto fox grin). Is Naruto going to the Ball? Is Sasuke going to be mad at Naruto if he finds him with Gaara? How will he react? Awwww! Poor Naruto will probably get him self into so much trouble and won't realize what he did wrong till its to late. Hows Gaara going to respond to Naruto?
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hah! 300th reviewer.

I love the plot development in this story. Sasuke and Naruto are starting to discover what their feelings for each other mean, and the sand siblings... I just love Gaara.

Hopefully nothing untoward happens in the next chapter over Naruto. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens.

Update as soon as you can!
person just_me
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, 7 chapters and i can't wait for nmr 8 to come. I already have this faint idea; Gaara sees Naruto as the boy of his dreams and tries to molest Naruto. Sasuke's going to walk in on the scene and drops the ramen. While Sasuke and Gaara are trying to kill one another, Naruto mourns the fallen ramen... Am I right? :D
Anyways, I like the story. It's the first brothel-story I started reading and couldn't get enough of... and now I have to wait for chapter 8 to come up. *whine*
Nah, take your time. You're a good writer. I'll be waiting for an update patiently. *nodnod*
person Hyang
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! AN UPDATE! AND YESSSS SOME GAANARU LUVIN!!! OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE!!!

Sorry for sounding like such a fangirl ^^; Anyhow, wonderful writing as always and I'm looking forward to your next update. Although Sasuke running with ramen is a little hard to imagine! Hahaha~
person Echo
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update! great chapter! Too bad your beta disappeared. I'd offer to beta but after catching a few slight errors near the front (eg. ...though his attentive kept getting distracted. -> ...though he kept getting distracted.), I got too involved in the story to check for more. ;p Good luck on finding someone to beta and please update soon.
person FlameArchanist
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I smell trouble brewing.
person Leasan
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOVE this fic, I simply adore it!!
I love absolutely everything about it! The humor, the plot, the ideas!
Oh, and let me guess, Gaara's dream boy is Naruto, right? So there will be some GaaraNaru, right? RIGHT???
I hope so 'cause it's my second favourite pairing!! (SasuNaru is the BEST!!!)
So just update ASAP!!!